Six Sentence Sunday #41 – Gentle Eyes

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: Simon is hanging with a punching bag in the club’s gym to let off some of the fury created by our lovely Janna, who is shaken by Simon’s dismissal This Week: Since Simon hasn’t returned, Janna decides to slip out of the club and fly home. Before she can make a move a man approaches her and asks if he can help.

She turned and looked into the gentle eyes of a tall older man. “No, thank you, I was just leaving.” She reached to gather her things, but he got to them first.

“You’re upset, I’d like to help, if I can.”

His tone required no argument, but she didn’t want to explain to a stranger why she was a waste of his time. “I’m just a guest from out of town, really, I’ll be fine.”

What do you think, does she leave or stay? Fate is stepping in, but who is this guy and can he really help bring Janna and Simon back together?  I’ll give you more next week. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn.

Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

Six Sentence Sunday #40 – Something Lost

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: Simon sought out a punching bag in the club’s gym to let off some of the fury created by our lovely Janna. This Week: we are back in Janna’s POV to see how she’s dealing with Simon’s exit.

She couldn’t move, shame filled her to bursting. Not only was her perfect night ruined, but she had angered him. The chill in his eyes as he turned away sent a shiver down her spine. It was all her fault, she always ruined things, a Janna specialty. Her inability to commit to any one thing drove her insane. And now she feared her worst trait lost her something special.

Poor Janna. Will she run home or will fate intervene?  I’ll give you a hint next week. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn.

Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

Six Sentence Sunday #39 – Release the Revulsion

Happy Six Sunday. Tomorrow is my one-year blogoversary, so I’ve changed a few things here. Do you like?

Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: Simon sought out a punching bag in the club’s gym to let off some of the fury created by our lovely Janna. This Week: we have the very next 6 from Simon.

Pressure reverberated from his hand straight to his heart, but it didn’t release the revulsion.

“Damn her.”

He tried to tell himself it was just another scene with no one but a guest sub. There was no possible way she could have felt as right as he thought, the anger tricked him. An image of her regret filled faced tugged at his resolve. His fingers flexed as he remembered her velvet channel, his cock twitched and he hit the bag again.

I still feel bad for the bag. 🙂 And what about Janna? I’ll let you know next week. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

Six Sentence Sunday #38 – Radiating fury

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order, received after care, and lied to a Dom. What’s going to happen now? This Week: I’ve skipped a bit more, Simon has dismissed Janna from his service and now, let’s see what he’s up to.

He wanted to hit something. What was it with submissives and their lies? He thundered past the scene areas and kept walking, increasing his speed. Folks saved themselves and moved out of his way. Fury radiated down his arms curling his fingers into fists, almost there. A couple more steps and he entered the gym and saw the innocent bag hanging right where he needed it to be.

I feel bad for the bag. 🙂 And what about Janna? You’ll have to come back. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

Six Sentence Sunday #37 – Answer me

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order and received yummy after care. This Week: I’ve skipped a bit more, including Janna’s moment of honesty. In today’s 6 we get Simon’s reaction.

“Why, why would you do this?” He pushed her away, in part to get some distance and to keep her safe from him. “Answer me.” When she still didn’t answer, “Now.”

“I wasn’t certain…”

“You lied to me.”

Uh-oh, not good. Is this the end for Janna and Simon? Well, were’re only on page-10 of the WIP, so I don’t think so. Gosh, I hope it’s not.

Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

LOOK! A Writing Challenge with Taking Chances

The never to back down, martini lovin, Sandra Bunino has handed me a LOOK writing challenge and I’m up for it, I think, lol.

Here’s the details (which I get to share with five fabulous authors): Find the LOOKs in your current WIPs AND post the paragraphs around the word. Choose your favorite THREE, because everyone has to have at least three, in your WIP to post.

Best part is sharing the love with some of my favorite writers, they’re each worth checking out:

Dara Ames ~ Dianne Hartsock ~ Jenny Hickman ~  Naomi Shaw ~ Savannah Chase

I had no trouble finding three in my WIP Taking Chances:

#1 comes from Chapter 1 and is in Jake’s POV

Get control of yourself man, there will be no fucking. It was a pity, because the curve of her beautiful, full behind would look amazing with the red impression of his hand. She had the perfect pale skin to pinkin.

#2 comes from Chapter 2 and is in Lydia’s POV

He turned to look out the window. When he didn’t say anything right away, she took advantage and continued to watch him. His gaze became captivated by the ravine and his expression softened.

#3 comes from Chapter 3, you get two looks this time, JOY :), and is in Jake’s POV, but the line is Lydia’s

“Ha, easy for you to say.” She looked up at him. “What is it? What are you looking at, do I have something on my face?”

Before he could stop himself, he sat beside her and his inquisitive finger reached out and rubbed the corner of her mouth. His finger hovered between them, an inch from her mouth. She licked her lips, seconds ticked by. Nothing in the room captured his attention, but her devilish mouth. Her tongue reached out and licked his finger. It took forever for his hand to return to his side, the air between them had become thick with heat. He couldn’t tear his sight from her beautiful hazel eyes.

Hope you enjoyed my share. Big thanks to Sandra, that was fun. Be sure to check out Sandra (all her books are must reads in my book) and all the authors listed above. Besides being talented writers these ladies are some of the nicest around.

Six Sentence Sunday #36 – False cocoon

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order and received yummy after care. This Week: in pretty much the very next 6, Janna continues her line of thought while bundled in Simon’s lap and covered in a warm blanket.

She would never see him again, not after she told him the truth. The heat in her body turned to ice. Tears threaten to escape like the nagging truth trying to break free. Her head lowered and she huddled underneath the false cocoon.

“Look at me, pet.”

He knew, she was a cheat and he knew.

Don’t count yourself out just yet, Janna. Come on girl, fight for what you want.

Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

Six Sentence Sunday #35 – Who’s the fighter?

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order and last week she was on the receiving end of yummy after care. This Week: in pretty much the very next 6, Janna takes a peek at the situation she’s gotten herself in.

The evening could have gone a hundred different ways, but Simon was put in her path and everything turned out better than she dreamed.

She owed him.

Her head crept up enough to allow her a peek through her eye lashes. He was handsome in a stern sort of way. The flat nose declared him a fighter.

Would he fight for me?

Oh, Janna, are you still dreaming or are you going to possibly fight for what you want this time?

Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

Six Sentence Sunday #34 – Imagination and longing

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon and she’s gotten her first glimpse of real scenes. In last week’s 6 she took on her first order, stripping for the Dom. This Week: oh, we skipped some yummy parts, sorry, and I give you the 6 following Janna’s first scene.

“Come on, let’s get you something to drink.” He turned, tugged on her hand, and they made their way to the couch.

She dreamed of after care, the tender moments filled her imagination with longing. She climbed into his lap and snuggled against him, eager to be held. She pressed her ear into his chest to get closer, his heart beat steady and strong filling her with strength. He pulled a blanket from somewhere and draped her, sealing the cocoon.

I’m happy for Janna, she made a huge step. So, do you think I’m going to be able to keep Janna happy? I give you one guess.

Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

Six Sentence Sunday #33 – She melts

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon and she’s gotten her first glimpse of real scenes. In last week’s 6 she took on her first order, stripping for the Dom. This Week: we continue were I left you last week.

With the last of her clothes set on the table, she straightened her back and let her shoulders fall.

Simon stalked towards her, stopped about a foot away, tempting her. “Well done, pet.”

She melted on the inside and swayed her hips as warmth filled her core. His gaze released her and she stood silent as he looked her over. Nerves threatened to walk back in, but she barred the way.

Not sure how much longer she’s going to be able to keep this up. It’s about to get interesting.  Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!