Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: Simon sought out a punching bag in the club’s gym to let off some of the fury created by our lovely Janna. This Week: we are back in Janna’s POV to see how she’s dealing with Simon’s exit.
She couldn’t move, shame filled her to bursting. Not only was her perfect night ruined, but she had angered him. The chill in his eyes as he turned away sent a shiver down her spine. It was all her fault, she always ruined things, a Janna specialty. Her inability to commit to any one thing drove her insane. And now she feared her worst trait lost her something special.
Poor Janna. Will she run home or will fate intervene? I’ll give you a hint next week. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn.
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‘Janna specialty.’ Love it. Poor girl. Can’t wait to read more.
Her thoughts are so sad. I hope fate does intervene!
Looks like Janna can use a pick me up. Hope Simon returns after letting off some steam!
Excellent emotion in this. You’re tugging at personal stuff for me here. I hope she realizes soon that she had more control over herself than she realizes. Great six.
Oh no! I feel bad for her. 😦
Poor thing. Hope it gets better!
Hopefully he’ll return to help her, and she’ll let him.
That kind of regret is a horrible feeling. You’ll make it better for her, won’t you?????
I’m with Monica, I hope he returns after punching the bag at gym. Her internal struggle is sad.
Aww poor thing. I feel for her.
Aw, l hope he see’s through her inadequacies and gives her another chance, great description.
Oh DEAR, she’s got insecurities! I hope he returns and helps her help herself…inagoodway LOL. Great six!
I’m hoping that someone takes over SSS.
Your snippet is great. It has great emotion and gets right into Janna’s head and we learn much about her.
I can feel her emotions in this six. Very well shown from her POV.
Love seeing her side of things. Poor girl.
Powerful emotion here & so easy to relate to.
Okay, he better be done punching that bag pretty soon. He needs to let her know everything’s okay! Heck, *I* need to know it’s okay — is it next Sunday yet? 🙂
Her disappointment is palpable!
Very moving six!
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Love the emotion! They HAVE to work this out!