Six Sentence Sunday #41 – Gentle Eyes

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: Simon is hanging with a punching bag in the club’s gym to let off some of the fury created by our lovely Janna, who is shaken by Simon’s dismissal This Week: Since Simon hasn’t returned, Janna decides to slip out of the club and fly home. Before she can make a move a man approaches her and asks if he can help.

She turned and looked into the gentle eyes of a tall older man. “No, thank you, I was just leaving.” She reached to gather her things, but he got to them first.

“You’re upset, I’d like to help, if I can.”

His tone required no argument, but she didn’t want to explain to a stranger why she was a waste of his time. “I’m just a guest from out of town, really, I’ll be fine.”

What do you think, does she leave or stay? Fate is stepping in, but who is this guy and can he really help bring Janna and Simon back together?  I’ll give you more next week. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn.

Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

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28 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday #41 – Gentle Eyes

  1. Pingback: Six Sentence Sunday #42 – Hotter Than The Sun | S. J. Maylee

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