Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I shared the first many months of 2012. Last Week: Simon is hanging with a punching bag in the club’s gym to let off some of the fury created by our lovely Janna, who is shaken by Simon’s dismissal. Before she can slip out of the club a mystery man steps in. This Week: I’m skipping a bit of her conversation with mystery man where she admits to a few things. The first line comes from the mystery man.
“From what I saw the scene went well.”
“Exactly, wait…you think so too?” Joy split through her frayed nerves and rightness filled her.
“Why not, you did as he asked and you had a beautiful orgasm. I saw nothing out of the ordinary.”
Her face felt hotter than the sun, he had watched.
The sweet man just helped her get out of her own way and maybe helped her find a new item on her hot list. But will fate continue its niceties and stop her from flying home? Her and Simon need another chance and I’m determined to give it to them. Come back next week and I’ll give you 6 more.
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Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn.Try to find a new favorite 6 today. happy hunting!
S.J. Maylee 
He had watched, though I imagine she would have preferred him to participate. Great six! 🙂
I wouldn’t rule it out, Jessica. But who knows, this is her first dip into pool.
Guess she forgot that part about being on display? 😉
You’re so right. She was in a sex club, how could she have forgot about the people around her. Simon must have had her attention more than she even realizes.
Well…any GOOD Dom/Domme has a way of commanding your complete attention unless they want it otherwise, no? 😉
I like his response, “you had a beautiful orgasm.” Interesting scene.
Thanks, Cara.
Embarrassing! I wonder what she’ll do now? Great six.
She may still run away home, you’ll have to come back and find out, Gemma.
The whole exhibition aspect is a nice touch.
Thanks, Lisa 🙂
Great interaction and I loved her reaction to hearing his praise and his view of things
Thanks, Angela. She’s so sweet an innocent, it never even occurred to her that the scene really was great.
Very sexy six! You’ve left me intrigued, wondering if she wants him to participate next time. Great six.
Thanks, Joanne. I can’t say, but I will say that her life is about to change.
Intriguing. Threesome time?
Threesomes can be fun… 😉
I would be absolutely mortified! OMG … who is this guy?
I know, right, but she was in a sex club. Who is this guy? Well, he’s just _____ 😉
We all need a little scene validation, don’t we? Great six!
Thanks, Renee. Agreed and I’m so happy he was there, she really needed it.
Intiguing six – did she know she was being watched by this stranger?
Yes, her scene with Simon took place in the open at a BDSM club. It’s further proof that Simon took control of her senses. Thanks for stopping by today, Paula.
Wow, what a thing to discover.
Agreed. Thanks for coming over today, Kristal.
Liked the orgasm line. I want to know who Mystery Man is!!
Oooh, sexy!
I would have had that exact reaction. Holy crap! Great six.
Ooh, that is a bit embarrassing-and also hot! Thanks for the mention 😉
Sounds like time for a little introspection as Janna tests her limits.
It’s sexy that he watched!
Very interesting and mysterious! So who is the guy who watched? I guess only time will tell…
Very interesting…who is he and does he want to do more than watch?
Well, that’ll stop you in your tracks. Sounds like she’s got a lot to think about.
So the watching works for her… 🙂
Watching is half the fun. 😉
I want to know more about this mystery guy. 🙂
What a great development! Hmmm… I wonder what Simon will think of this guy approaching her… ?
very intriguing six!
Nice six! He was watching…hot!
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