Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: Simon is hanging with a punching bag in the club’s gym to let off some of the fury created by our lovely Janna, who is shaken by Simon’s dismissal This Week: Since Simon hasn’t returned, Janna decides to slip out of the club and fly home. Before she can make a move a man approaches her and asks if he can help.
She turned and looked into the gentle eyes of a tall older man. “No, thank you, I was just leaving.” She reached to gather her things, but he got to them first.
“You’re upset, I’d like to help, if I can.”
His tone required no argument, but she didn’t want to explain to a stranger why she was a waste of his time. “I’m just a guest from out of town, really, I’ll be fine.”
What do you think, does she leave or stay? Fate is stepping in, but who is this guy and can he really help bring Janna and Simon back together? I’ll give you more next week. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn.
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S.J. Maylee 
Intriguing. I wonder who this stranger is….
She’ll stay! Sounds great so far…
I think she’ll stay. And I’m wondering who this stranger is, too. Great six! 🙂
I think she should leave and then maybe he’ll realise what he’s lost. Loving this!
She’s got to stay now. And the double quandary, who is the stranger, and why is she upset. Power in “Six” today….
Maybe it’s just me but I’m getting a whiff of danger from this new person but either way, it’s all intriguing! Great six!
Your sniffer isn’t totally off. This stranger might have her best interests at heart, but he’s still a business man and they can be fickle.
I think she should be freaked out that he grabbed her things when she tried to leave no matter how gentle his eyes are!
Well, being a writer, I know there’s a reason you have this man stepping in. So I’m very intrigued. Excellent emotion in here as well. Terrific six!
Yes, there is a good reason. Simon and Janna may be brilliant, but they need some help.
An intriguing offer from a mystery man.
Hmm…I’m feeling suspicious! Intriguing six!
Uh-oh. The plot thickens!
Nice six. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
This story has a lot of layers. Love it. Definitely curious to find out who the guy is, and what his role is in their romance. Great six!!
If she’s submissive and he’s DOM enough… That will give Simon something to think about!
Uh oh! What’s going on?!
Hope he can convince her to stay, and she and Simon work things out.
Intriguing six which leaves me wondering just who this stranger is.
I’d like to know who the stanger is myself. I also wonder why she feels she’s a waste of time? Intriguing six, being it’s the first time I’m reading any of your sixes.
Nice characterization for both. Very nice six.
I like this set up. The stranger might be well-meaning or dangerous…but he’s clearly more than he seems at first glance. Thanks for sharing!
Hard to know if he means well or has ulterior motives. Very mysterious…thanks for sharing!
I think she’ll stay. Great set up.
Hmm, I’m wondering what this guy is up to. We better find out next Sunday! LOL I’ll be a nervous wreck otherwise. 🙂
Hoping she stays with a chance to get back together with Simon. I want to see some steamy stuff happen. Great six!
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A convenient diversion or something more? SO glad I get to keep reading! ;c)