Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order and last week she was on the receiving end of yummy after care. This Week: in pretty much the very next 6, Janna takes a peek at the situation she’s gotten herself in.
The evening could have gone a hundred different ways, but Simon was put in her path and everything turned out better than she dreamed.
She owed him.
Her head crept up enough to allow her a peek through her eye lashes. He was handsome in a stern sort of way. The flat nose declared him a fighter.
Would he fight for me?
Oh, Janna, are you still dreaming or are you going to possibly fight for what you want this time?
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I bet Simon has never fought for a woman. This is going to get interesting! 🙂
Simon would love to fight for a woman, but never has. He’s never found a woman to fight for. 🙂
Oh, I hope she doesn’t get her heart broken.
Me too, but somethings are inevitable, but I’m working on that 🙂
It’s a shame she feels she ‘owes’ him, but maybe he’s worth it. Love the description.
Agreed, but why does she she feel she owes him? Has she been dishonest with herself or with him? The plot is about to thicken.
Loved that last line..that one little question really shows her emotion.
A very revealing six! I’m wondering if she’s needed someone to fight for her before. 🙂
She sure has needed someone to fight for her, but never before has she gotten it, not even from herself
She certainly does seem submissive.
You’re really leaving us with a question unanswered. Will it go well between them? She seems devoted to him. Great 6
Ooo, love the way you describe Master Simon! I’m really enjoying this story! Great six!!
Oh! Meant to tell you (and hope it saves you time during your edits). Peek, not peak. Spell check won’t pick it up because both are spelled right but mean something different. I really wish there was a software I could buy that would check all my words and ask “did you mean this spelling or that spelling?” because I am NOTORIOUS for doing the same dadgum thing, LOL!
Yes, Thank you, big hugs to you, K.E.!! Sometimes I catch things like this and sometimes I don’t. Thanks for the help, you’re the best.
Love that last line. Great six!
Uh oh. She’s in danger of wearing her heart on her sleeve. Good six!
I agree with Gemma and hate that she feels she owes him…but knowing you, SJ, there’s more to the story than meets the eye.
Nice job developing intrigue, here. You have us all wanting more!
She’s falling hard for him. And vice versa? Great six, S.J.!
Nice build-up here, and an intriguing last line.
I’m so enjoying following her around that club!
Dying to see what happens next.
Good tension in this six!
Great last line. Am now so curious about the rest.
Wow, the story is taking a new turn, wonder how she hopes to have him “fight for her”? Many interesting events to come, I bet! Great six!
Very sexy. I hope he *does* have to fight for her… and that you’ll let us watch 😉
Wow! Very sexy! Love the last line.
Hmm… I’m not wild about the BDSM stuff, but there’s some interesting reflection going on there. Thanks for sharing!
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I really love the intimacy of looking through her lashes. I’m enjoying this story through your sixes!