Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order and received yummy after care. This Week: in pretty much the very next 6, Janna continues her line of thought while bundled in Simon’s lap and covered in a warm blanket.
She would never see him again, not after she told him the truth. The heat in her body turned to ice. Tears threaten to escape like the nagging truth trying to break free. Her head lowered and she huddled underneath the false cocoon.
“Look at me, pet.”
He knew, she was a cheat and he knew.
Don’t count yourself out just yet, Janna. Come on girl, fight for what you want.
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Is she married? He senses something in the bashful babe. Nice six!
Interesting. Would love to see/know more!
Oh, I hope everything works out for her. Great six! 🙂
Can’t wait to find out what secret she’s hiding. Excellent tension and Master Simon seems to like her more than she thinks. Great six!!
Nice conflict!
Great six — I love how her physical reactions let him know what’s going on in her mind. 🙂
Aww, her inner turmoil is heartbreaking.
Awww…I feel so bad for her. You did a great job with getting the emotion across!
Uh oh… sounds like someone’s bottom is going to be red and stinging before this is all over.
Love the emotion, great job 😉
I felt so sad for her. Her emotions, knowing she had done wrong were portrayed perfectly in this clip. I hope she gets future happiness
Oh no! What trouble has she gotten into?
Ooh, nice little bit of ending tension there. Lovely read!
The tension created by a conflicted heroine is portrayed nicely. What will his response be? Nicely done!
Things have to turn out better than she’s expecting! Intriguing excerpt, can’t wait for the next piece of the story.
ooh… leaves me hungry to know! Great tension!
How accurately drawn – revealing her true self… Great stuff!
Great conflict! Makes me wonder how she’ll handle this.
I feel so bad for her. Nice job!
Great six! This is such a good story and I can’t wait to read more.
Very moving six!
Oh, no! What is her secret?! Great emotion (and mystery!) here. ;c)
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