Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order and received yummy after care. This Week: I’ve skipped a bit more, including Janna’s moment of honesty. In today’s 6 we get Simon’s reaction.
“Why, why would you do this?” He pushed her away, in part to get some distance and to keep her safe from him. “Answer me.” When she still didn’t answer, “Now.”
“I wasn’t certain…”
“You lied to me.”
Uh-oh, not good. Is this the end for Janna and Simon? Well, were’re only on page-10 of the WIP, so I don’t think so. Gosh, I hope it’s not.
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Sounds like she has some explaining to do!
To keep her safe from him….now that’s intriguing.
Oh dear, I sense a punishment coming. Bad girl!
Hopefully she’s good at explaining herself! Tense six.
I have just heard the sad news of SSS ending, too. 😦
Lying, the cardinal sin! Someone is going to be saying “ouch”.
She has som explaining to do… Great six.
I’m very intrigued by this. I’m dying to know what she lied about, and what, exactly, he’s going to do about it. I love his reaction. You can see he’s torn. Terrific six!
Uh oh. Luuuuccee, you got some ‘splaining to do.
Intriguing six! I definitely want to know more!
Nothing like some lover’s tension! Nice and sets us up for some hot makeup sex way beyond page 10 no doubt.
Very emotional….definitely makes me want to read more!
Ah… the tension! What an intriguing 6! Great job!
Hard to come back from lies and breaching trust but I hope this couple can accomplish it. Excellent excerpt, this is an intriguing story for sure.
You skipped the WRONG PART! LOL. I want to know what she said! And *that* said, great six, SJ!
😀 can you see my evil grin, lol. Thanks for sticking with me anyways.
No, Doms don’t tend to like that… hope she can make it up to him 😉
Power of the “Words” used in this brief interlude. Feeling the need for “More” please. and
His thoughts about keeping her safe from him leads me to wonder what he is considering.
He wants to keep her safe even though he suspects she lied to him. Admirable, but is there also something threatening behind his words?
There is, because lying is at the top of Simon’s list. She has no idea how lucky she is at this moment.
Uh oh… she’s so busted! Great six!
I wonder what she confessed? Wow, this is very powerful stuff, S.J. I really like Simon a lot. Great six!!
Dont’ skip! What the heck did she tell him? Ugh. Obviously, he’s not a happy camper. Great stuff!
Loved the tension 🙂
Ooh, that’s a real ‘shivers up the spine’ moment – when he pushes her away to protect her from himself. The rage scorches out of this tiny action. Great stuff.
Oh dear — I don’t want this to be the end for them. I can’t wait to see how they resolve this. 🙂
Ooh! Someone’s in trouble!!! (And her name is Janna) I’ve come to look forward to 6 sentence Sundays. I’m gonna miss when you guys stop. 😦
Lying and being caught is a hard thing to come back from. Makes me wonder how she’ll regain his trust. He doesn’t sound like he’s in a receptive mood right now.
Uh oh! Sounds like she has some work to do! Great tension!
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I want to know what she did. Great six!