Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Over the last couple of 6s she took on her first order, received after care, and lied to a Dom. What’s going to happen now? This Week: I’ve skipped a bit more, Simon has dismissed Janna from his service and now, let’s see what he’s up to.
He wanted to hit something. What was it with submissives and their lies? He thundered past the scene areas and kept walking, increasing his speed. Folks saved themselves and moved out of his way. Fury radiated down his arms curling his fingers into fists, almost there. A couple more steps and he entered the gym and saw the innocent bag hanging right where he needed it to be.
I feel bad for the bag. 🙂 And what about Janna? You’ll have to come back. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
Interested to see where this goes! I like the line about submissives and their lies 🙂
Sounds like this submissive really got to him. Hope the bag is tough. Great six! 🙂
Well l’m glad it’s the bag he’s going to punch! Tense six.
That poor bag is in for it. Great six!
I want to answer his question about submissives and their lies. When one has no overt power, she will use covert power. Interesting six.
I love that, Cara, well said. The statement is especially true for this sub and her history.
A Dom with that much difficulty suppressing his anger sounds a chancy proposition for a new sub to me. But that’ll make for good plot fireworks. 🙂
Great tension in your six. I wonder what will happen when he sees her again.
Truth in Dominance. Taking out human contact yet still showing the emotional connection. Great scene here
I have a feeling the punching bag won’t satisfy what’s really going on…powerful six!
Interesting that there’s a gym AT the BDSM club–total body and mind care, eh? Yeah, she definitely got to him. Look forward to seeing her post split scene.
That’s it exactly, the owners have a total body, mind, and soul thing going on. Their businesses include the sex club, a gym with standard equipment and rooms for yoga, Pilates, and Nia of course.
Hope he works out his frustrations on the bag 🙂
I agree that a dom who can’t control his anger is a dangerous thing. However, that makes for good conflict.
I could feel and see his anger…great job!
Great emotion! Hope the bag is tough.
My, oh, my. Simon does NOT like to be lied to. I’m curious why submissives lie to him so much (which is a good thing: makes me want to read lots more of the story!!) Great six!
“Submissives and their lies”… she’s definitely gotten to him, but how will Janna deal with the situation now? Great six!
Great six, you’ve nailed his anger and frustration!
Love the description!
It’s clear Janna has those invisible strings on him now. It’s that BDSM circle – who controls whom? I loved this!
Mr. Cranky Pants, seriously needs to get laid! Just kidding–ok, maybe not so much. 😉
You did a great job on his anger, I pitty the poor bag. Dying to read more!
Ha, ha, you’re so right. I’m working on it, well I already wrote it, but that’s for a different Sunday 🙂
Great 6, you captured his frustration and anger and I pity that punching bag…
Interesting spot! Janna definately wiggled under his skin. Great story, SJ!
Great depiction of anger here. I loved how people “saved” themselves and got out of his way. LOL I’m enjoying each week’s snippet. 🙂
Did you change your blog? I love the look! (Or maybe I just suffer from CRS, lol.) This is a great window into him. I LOVE “folks saved themselves” – that’s so awesome!
Pingback: Six Sentence Sunday #39 – Release the Revulsion | S. J. Maylee