Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon and she’s gotten her first glimpse of real scenes. In last week’s 6 Simon offered to be her Dom for her last night in Chicago. This Week: I’ve propelled us forward a couple pages and gotten us to the point where Simon has requested her to remove her clothes.
She needed to reveal her body, not to the room, to this man…correction, this Dom. She was not leaving without giving this a real try. She reached back and unclipped her bra, her free arm held the cups and smashed them into her chest. After one more deep breath, her fingers clawed around the bra cups and pulled revealing her small breasts. Cool air swirled around her tender, tight nipples. His gaze remained unmoved from hers, could he see the nerves dancing along her skin?
I hope she doesn’t pass out before she completes her first set of orders. 🙂 Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
I do like her determination and nakedness in this six (emotional and physical).
Only one point: you don’t need an apostrophe in her’s – should just be “hers.”
Hey, thanks! I didn’t catch that yesterday, much appreciated 🙂
Very hot! Love the depth of character her actions reveal!
Good combination of nervousness and eagerness. Really like this scene.
She’s finally getting what she wants, but her nervousness is evident. Nice six! 🙂
Loved the scene 🙂
I have a feeling he knows exactly what she’s going through and he loves every minute. Sensational six, SJ!
Great internal tension!
You do a good job balancing her nervousness with her determination. Nice six!
Way to ramp up the action! VERY sexy six!
Oh wow. I love the tension and the way she feels her nerves are ‘dancing’ along her skin. Hot!
Like her determination.
“nerves dancing along her skin” fantastic description!
Oh, I love the tension in this six. Great job!
Fabulous build-up of her big reveal, great tension!
Great post, l love the determination mixed with fear that she is experiencing.
You’re doing well. You’ve perfectly captured the tension one would naturally feel doing something like that.
I admire her bravery in moving forward on something she wants to try so badly – you draw the scene and the feelings SO well! Terrific snippet!
Love it!!! Reay interested in seeing more! I did a 6 Sent Sunday, too. Would love if u checked it out! Have a good one!
I like that she’s fighting her nervousness and wondering if he senses it, too. Sexy six!
WOW..you painted the scene perfectly! Loved that she went for it 🙂 Wonderful six.
The tension just keeps building. Delicious and seductive. 🙂
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Yowza! Such a bold, vulnerable moment. Awesome!
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