Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think!! I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon. Last week he walked her to the playroom door. This Week: I’m giving you the very next 6.
Club music, with a heavy bass, beat through her chest. Smacks of paddles, whooshes of whips, and bodies meeting wrenched throughout the room. Her eyes wide with trepidation and exhilaration located the nearest scene. Her feet found their way.
The woman knelt before her Dom, her eyes focused on him alone. Her hands bound behind her back displayed her trust. Janna melted in want.
Will Janna get a taste of what she wants? Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
I hope she does get a taste of what she wants. Great six! 🙂
Very sexy six. Love the last line!
Great description, esp. the heavy base beating through her chest. 🙂
Nice piece of writing today. Thanks for sharing.
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Sounds like she knows what she needs. Great six!
I think she’s hooked. I love the last line! Super six, SJ!
Melted in want. GREAT line. That says it all.
Aww, now I’m a puddle, too. Great six, S.J. 😉
Oh, I’m so intrigued. Great six!
Melting for her! Great six!
You did a wonderful job with “setting the stage” and conveying her emotions. Well done.
Ooh excellent imagery! I was there and wanting to be involved. I have to read this book 🙂
You painted the scene very well! Sounds like she’s in for an interesting time!
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Very nice way to set the “scene” .
Great build-up to Jenna and this man. Looking forward to reading what happens to them!
I don’t think she can turn back now. Great six!
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Nicely descriptive scene!
Sexy–love that last line! Sounds like she’s in her element now. Great six, great story. Really makes me want to read more. Just a couple of proofreading notes (which you’d probably find in edits anyway, so hope this speeds that along for you, LOL!): I think you mean “heavy bass, beat…” not base. Also, I found “‘wrenched’ throughout the room” confusing. I don’t *think* that’s the meaning you meant…but it’s up to you. Can’t wait to see what happens next in this story!
Thank you!! I do need someone to look out for me. Thank you for taking me on this week 😀
Oh, boy. It’s getting hot in here!
Exhilaration and Trepidation… quite a heady mix!
Very very nice! I think you captured the scene very well. Oh yum…
“Melted in want” is just a GREAT phrase. I enjoy how this story is developing – excellent excerpt!
You know, of all the times I’ve read play room / club scenes (not THAT many but a few), no one has ever mentioned (to my recollection) the sounds of paddles and whips. It’s usually a visual description with maybe the mention of music. Nicely done.
Very sexy. I love the stark pace you’ve set here. I imagine it matches her excitement. Well done.
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