Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think!! I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. As a guest, she is not allowed to enter the club without an escort. Last week, Master Simon asked Janna for her name and surprise, she gave it up 😉 This Week: As we predicted, Simon has agreed to escort Janna into the club. We start with her following him to the main room.
The landing at the top of the stairs revealed a bulky set of wooden double doors. Simon stood waiting for her like a ticket to the lands of all things erotic. Her pulsed kicked into high gear and a cold sweat tickled between her breasts. He opened the door and held it for her.
“Welcome to Club Voyage, Jenna.”
The smells hit her first, leather, sweat, and sex.
Will she run, or will she dive into the fantasy she’s only read about? Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
Oooh thats hot. Great six. I am looking forward to reading the book hon 🙂
That last line is just perfect!
The last line is AH-MAZING! That one short sentence put me right there! Great six sentences!
“A ticket to the land of all things erotic” — very tantalizing. How could she say no? 🙂
Absolutely wicked six, I will echo everyone else; those two lines sparkle.
Nice job of setting the scene. I like it.
Nice tension in this snippet. 🙂
Whoa! That’s a steamy scene, and I have a feeling it’s going to get steamier. Great six.
Mmm leather, sweat, and sex. What a lovely combination. 😉
Oh my, l’d either be rooted to the spot like her or heading for the door, quickly!
Very sensual set up! Loved all six sentences but this one is my favorite:
Simon stood waiting for her like a ticket to the lands of all things erotic.
Oh my! Super sessay six, SJ! I agree with Christine – I love the “lands of all things erotic” line. I can’t wait for more of this!
She is in for one amazing experience.
Club Voyage! Love that! She’s in for a treat.
Interesting six, and great last line.
Um, where exactly is this club? My um, friend wants to visit. *shifty eyes*
I see you, Dee, lol. It’s inside the imaginary Chicago in my head. Come on over.
Can’t wait to see what she finds inside! And Simon is devastating.
I enjoyed the pacing, loved the phrasing, and can’t wait to see what’s behind that door! Excellent excerpt!
Your writing is so descriptive!
Hey, it’s good to see you on my six Sunday post 🙂 You should jump in this linky fun. I’d love to see six from you, Julie.
Love how you incorporate the senses. Feels very dirty… in a good way 🙂
Very sensuous and vivid scene. Love the line “he waited for her like a ticket to… all things erotic…”!
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Love this introduction and that last line ties it together so well. Sex, sweat, and leather made it real for me!
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Lisa is right. You’re last line is a perfect cliffhanger. Awesome six!