Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think!! I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. As a guest, she is not allowed to enter the club without an escort. Master Simon entered the club last week and the nice security guard asked him if he’d escort our Janna. This Week: Simon just asked Janna for her name.
She pivoted on her toes and examined his boots, luscious black leather. She walked her line of sight along his legs, drank in his firm body, to his broad chest encased in a casual, black shirt. Her fingers scratched at her skirt, she wanted to touch him. Seconds continued to tick by and he waited, he hadn’t re-asked the question or stepped closer. He wasn’t rushing her.
Jenna is already pushing it and she’s just in the lobby. Oh boy. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
So realistic. I love your imagery. I could almost feel the cloth of the skirt rubbing against my leg as she scratched her skirt. I can’t wait to read more of this story 🙂
I like the way she surveys him, and her reaction too.
Great way to describe him. Sounds like a hot guy! 🙂
Nice build-up of tension.
Very vivid imagery here. Can’t wait to see how these two interact verbally as the story progresses. Great six!
Oooh, I love how he doesn’t rush her. What a fabulous line, and the descriptions here ROCK!
You had me at “boots, luscious black leather”. *swoon* I love how he just waits for her answer, too. Yum.
Loved how you gave us the visual of her gaze walking up his body…nicely done.
I think he will take her into the club and l can’t wait to read what’s going on in there!
Intriguing six. Looking forward to reading more. 🙂
“She walked her line of sight along his legs” – I LOVE that! This snip really plays to the senses very well, creating a big and powerful image in a few words. Well done. Lyn.
No Jenna. No! Ugh. I’m getting emotional about her choice. Good six!!
Very visual six, Gemma, beautifully written. 🙂
I mean S.J..sleep deprivation is not a good thing, apologies 😦
Hope she knows what she’s getting into. I’m anxious to know what she’s getting into. 😉 Awesome detail and atmosphere. Very well done, S.J.!
Now that’s a sexy six 🙂
I think it’s interesting that he’s being so patient with her…NOW….enjoyed the excerpt very much!
Lots of tension here! Love the way you’re building the chemistry between them!
I liked your six sentence sunday. I just posted mines check it out. http://www.soniawrites.com/2012/07/six-sentence-sunday-brushing-teeth.html
I love her eyes walking up his body and the black shirt. Delicious six.
YUM! Keep going…. 🙂
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