Six Sentence Sunday #27

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think!! I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. As a guest, she is not allowed to enter the club without an escort. Master Simon entered the club last week and the nice security guard asked him if he’d escort our Janna. This Week: Simon just asked Janna for her name.

She pivoted on her toes and examined his boots, luscious black leather. She walked her line of sight along his legs, drank in his firm body, to his broad chest encased in a casual, black shirt. Her fingers scratched at her skirt, she wanted to touch him. Seconds continued to tick by and he waited, he hadn’t re-asked the question or stepped closer. He wasn’t rushing her.

“I’m Jenna.”

Jenna is already pushing it and she’s just in the lobby. Oh boy. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

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23 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday #27

  1. So realistic. I love your imagery. I could almost feel the cloth of the skirt rubbing against my leg as she scratched her skirt. I can’t wait to read more of this story 🙂

  2. “She walked her line of sight along his legs” – I LOVE that! This snip really plays to the senses very well, creating a big and powerful image in a few words. Well done. Lyn.

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