Weekend Writing Warriors – Nerves and Romance


Welcome friends new and old. I submitted a WIP late last year (my first submission ever) and this week it got a full request. Squee!! Would you dance with me a little. Thanks. 😀

In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.

Over the past few weeks I’ve shared Jane’s experience at Club Blind and her business opportunity that put her in touch with Rob. Last Week We met Rob and his best friend. Rob’s just a little excited to see Jane again. Now I give you 8 more from the end of their conversation.

“Thank you, you were right, and now I’ve got a hot date.”

“You’ve got a business meeting. Don’t mess it up.”

Rob hung up the phone and picked up his basketball, rolling the ball around in his hands, he paced the room. Concern took over his excitement. He would mess everything up if he didn’t tell Jane about Gina. There had to be a way to tell the woman you wanted about the woman you no longer loved. He’d hoped to have a first date with Jane before he had to bring up his ex-wife.

“Shit, I am going to mess this up.”

Somebody’s nervous. Next week I promise to give you a snippet from when Jane and Rob meet. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Weekend Warriorsand Saturday Spankings too. I hope to see you again next Sunday.

24 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors – Nerves and Romance

  1. How sad that he no longer loves someone that he thinks he used to love. And now he has to convince another woman that he wants her? He has a right to be nervous. Great layers of conflict.

    Congrats on your news!

  2. I love his nervousness – he so wants things to go right before he brings up what went wrong before. Nicely done, SJ. 🙂

  3. Must be something important about the ex that he’s worried about telling Jane. But as this upcoming meeting is for business I think he needs to relax a bit and focus on the work aspect.

  4. Pingback: Weekend Writing Warriors – Eyes Shut and Missing Out | S. J. Maylee

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