Welcome friends new and old. I’m going to give you a couple more posts from the WIP I’ve been sharing before I move onto something new.
In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.
Over the past few weeks I’ve shared Jane’s experience at Club Blind and her business opportunity that put her in touch with Rob. Last Week and the week before we spent with Rob. Now I’m bringing the two together. This week, Jane is lost in thought. While she waits for Rob, she kicks out her nerves by remembering her night at Club Blind. Rob has just arrived at the coffee shop, he has his cup of coffee, and now he’s got to get Jane’s attention.
Jane blacked out her thoughts, closed her eyes and remembered how she felt Saturday night. She didn’t need to see anything to feel his hand stroking her thigh or relive his warm mouth sucking her clit. Would she ever get a night like that again? Would she ever meet a man like him?”
“Jane, it’s good to see you.”
“Oh. Hi, Rob, thanks for meeting me. What can I get you to drink?”
Opps. Open your eyes, Jane. See the man right in front of you. I mean, he has his coffee already 😉
Hope you enjoyed my eight today. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Weekend Warriors, and Saturday Spankings too.
S.J. Maylee 
A man like that, bringing coffee? Yeah, Jane — open your eyes! I love this — can’t wait to see it developing some more. 🙂
Nice snippet! I like the voice and I like the inner dialogue a lot.
Oh, S.J. I am so addicted to this story. lol I love this snippet. You want to strangle her, but of course we know more than she does. I can’t wait for the moment when she finally realizes it’s him.
Oh! I want to see her reaction when she opens her eyes. Pretty please.
That WILL be a fun moment when she opens her eyes. I predict some spilled coffee LOL. This is a terrific story!
Great build up and like everyone else l’m longing for the moment when her jaw drops!
Okay, gonna read this one habitually now. LOL Loved this! Great premise!
Awesome 8. I really enjoyed the read. Good internal dialogue going on.
~Summer
My 8
She better open her eyes. He sounds very sexy. Great job and loved her inner dialogue. Loved it. 🙂
Uh oh, she might want to be in the present rather than the past. Fun snippet, SJ. I can hardly wait for this one to come out. 🙂
I’m hoping she’ll figure it out soon! Good story.
He sounds adorable! Cute snippet.
Oh, I can’t wait to see her reaction when she realizes that Rob is the guy she’s been fantasizing bout this whole time.
Love the inner dialog. Can’t wait for more. 🙂
Very captivating snippet. Well done. I loved it.
Sometimes it’s hard to see what’s right in front of us.
Would she ever meet a man like that again? Um…yeah, if she’d bother to look.
That’s great. That line about the clit was very surprising, which is great for the beginning of a story
Good contrast between the thoughts, and then the formal meeting.
But he knows who she is, right? Wasn’t that in a prior 8? So maybe he can ahem help her along by dropping a few key phrases, hmm? Love this story.
I’ve missed a lot of this story! Six Sunday was great because everybody was in one place. Love the idea of this. How close to completion are you?
I agree. I still hunt around for my favorites though. I’ve finished the first draft, put it through a few rounds of edits, and I just got it back from my CP. In another week or two I’ll be looking for beta readers. I’m getting there.
Great snippet! I like her voice.
What a teasing and intriguing snippet 🙂
I love the premise of this story. Another excellent 8, S.J. ! 🙂
Oh my, will she be surprised when she opens her eyes! Good snippet!
Thanks everyone. I love that you guys come back and are so supportive. It makes my heart smile. I’m taking next week off for Easter, but I’ll be back sharing another new snippet on April 7th.
I love this story!
I can’t wait for her reaction when she puts it all together. Great snippet!
OMG. That *moment* when she opens her eyes is going to be KILLER!
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