Weekend Writing Warriors – Eyes Shut and Missing Out


Welcome friends new and old. I’m going to give you a couple more posts from the WIP I’ve been sharing before I move onto something new.

In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.

Over the past few weeks I’ve shared Jane’s experience at Club Blind and her business opportunity that put her in touch with Rob. Last Week and the week before we spent with Rob. Now I’m bringing the two together. This week, Jane is lost in thought. While she waits for Rob, she kicks out her nerves by remembering her night at Club Blind. Rob has just arrived at the coffee shop, he has his cup of coffee, and now he’s got to get Jane’s attention.

Jane blacked out her thoughts, closed her eyes and remembered how she felt Saturday night. She didn’t need to see anything to feel his hand stroking her thigh or relive his warm mouth sucking her clit. Would she ever get a night like that again? Would she ever meet a man like him?”

“Jane, it’s good to see you.”

“Oh. Hi, Rob, thanks for meeting me. What can I get you to drink?”

Opps. Open your eyes, Jane. See the man right in front of you. I mean, he has his coffee already 😉

Hope you enjoyed my eight today. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Weekend Warriorsand Saturday Spankings too.

31 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors – Eyes Shut and Missing Out

  1. Oh, S.J. I am so addicted to this story. lol I love this snippet. You want to strangle her, but of course we know more than she does. I can’t wait for the moment when she finally realizes it’s him.

  2. Uh oh, she might want to be in the present rather than the past. Fun snippet, SJ. I can hardly wait for this one to come out. 🙂

  3. But he knows who she is, right? Wasn’t that in a prior 8? So maybe he can ahem help her along by dropping a few key phrases, hmm? Love this story.

    • I agree. I still hunt around for my favorites though. I’ve finished the first draft, put it through a few rounds of edits, and I just got it back from my CP. In another week or two I’ll be looking for beta readers. I’m getting there.

  4. Thanks everyone. I love that you guys come back and are so supportive. It makes my heart smile. I’m taking next week off for Easter, but I’ll be back sharing another new snippet on April 7th.

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