Welcome friends new and old, warriors and write club members alike. I’m going to give you a couple more posts from the story I’ve been sharing. The first draft is finished and I’m in full on edit mode. I will hit send to the CP this week. I will. 🙂
In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past six posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.
Over the past few weeks I’ve shared Jane’s experience at Club Blind. Last Week Jane worked at remembering her mystery man, from the club, only provided her with a transition back into dating. Jane’s just gotten a chance to fill a job opening for a VIP client. She knows exactly who she wants applying for the job, he has the necessary skills, plus he’s the fantasy man she met last month. A fantasy because, although they hit it off and he’s been divorced for some time, he was still wearing the ring. She’s gotten the man on the phone and laid out a proposition to meet and discuss the opportunity. Will he agree or won’t he?
The silence on the phone grew deafening as her heart thumped in her chest. “Come on, I’ll buy you a great cup of coffee.” She’d never get another chance to help Keller, if she didn’t find him the right candidate. She also wanted to find out if Rob had taken off his ring.
“Okay, tomorrow, eleven o’clock at the place just past Clark on Diversey, lake side.”
“Sounds perfect, but make it nine and wear a suit.”
Jane is in the zone and calling the shots, will that continue through their meet? Come back next week and I’ll give you some from Rob’s POV. Until then, I hope you enjoyed my
eight six today. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Write Club, Weekend Warriors, and Saturday Spankings too. I hope to see you again next Sunday.
This like a very promising meet indeed!
I wonder if he’ll recognize her.
I love this story…and that she’s in the zone, all in control now, when we’ve seen her totally hand it over in earlier sentences. Good luck with your submission. I really want to read this one when it’s out there.
A woman in control. Love it! Can’t wait to hear Rob’s POV. I wonder if he feels the same for her. Great six sentences : )
Ooh, Club Blind is a great name. Looking forward to seeing Rob take over. I mean, erm, if he does 🙂
This is looking good, can’t wait for Rob’s point of view!
The premise on this story is so interesting…I can’t wait to see how Rob feels and what will happen next. Excellent excerpt!
ahh! she’s in control and I love it. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Great job. 🙂
I like her attitude. Nice snippet!
Ooooh, I’m so glad she found him and he’s willing to respond to her invite. Nicely done, SJ. 🙂
Sounds promising. I can’t wait for the scene when they finally meet.
This should be good. Looking forward to Rob’s POV.
You’ve pulled me in. Great tease! Now I’m wondering if he’s taken off his ring too. 🙂
Gotta love a man in a suit 🙂
Haha. I like her sharp attitude. She sounds like a strong woman. She knows what she wants 🙂
It’s gonna get spicy! Waiting to see what she does next.
I love her last line! Confidence is sexy.
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I *so* want to be there when they meet up! *grins*