Welcome friends new and old. I’m going to give you a couple more posts from the story I’ve been sharing. The first draft is finished and I’m in full on edit mode. 🙂
In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past six posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.
Over the past few weeks I’ve shared Jane’s experience at Club Blind. Last Week their night came to an end. Now, it’s the next day and Jane is talking to her best friend, Anne, on the phone. The first line is Jane’s.
“I can still hear his voice in my head.”
“He talked to you?”
“Yes, it was much more than I expected.”
“Jane.”
“I wish—”
“Jane, stop right there, you are not supposed to fall for this guy, he was your transition guy. Now you know it wasn’t you, Adam was wrong. I’ll set you up, okay?”
Do you think Jane is going to forget about her mystery man? Don’t worry, I have a plan, but it won’t be easy. You’ll have to come back to find out more. Until then, I hope you enjoyed my eight today. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Weekend Warriors and Saturday Spankings too. I hope to see you again next Sunday.
S.J. Maylee 
nah, Jane’s hooked in… no going back for her 😉 fab snippet, really natural character interaction and you made it pretty clear, Jane has met the man of her dreams. Whether she knows it or not yet 😉
Nope, Jane won’t forget.
Because telling someone to forget a guy ALWAYS works, right? 🙂 Nice.
I’d say she couldn’t forget if she wanted to. Wonderful!
I sure hope she can’t forget about him. 😉 Terrific snippet. Can’t wait to see where this goes.
Ah, the dreaded Transition Guy…but sometimes it works out and I’m sure that’s what she’s thinking to herself. I’m really enjoying this story – terrific snippet!
Oh oh, l love that she fell for him!
Interesting direction…
Love at first fv<£? hat's an interesting way round to do it. Nice snippet.
Thanks for sharing tidbits and whetting out appetite. 🙂
I really want to read this…I come back every week to catch more snippets. So hurry up!
So sexy…still hearing his voice. What about his smell?
Love is in the air even if it was her transition guy. I’m hooked and have to know what happens next. 🙂
And I will be back to find out more too! Good 8.
I’ll be she won’t forget. Nice scene 🙂
Nope. I don’t think she’s going to forget him anytime soon.
No, she’s not going to forget. And I don’t think he will forget her either.
You’ve got my attention. Great snippet!
Oh, he’s definitely her transition guy – transitioning into happy 😀 Nice snippet, SJ. 🙂
I’m joining Team Remember! Very sexy snippet.
There’s something really romantic about falling for the transition guy. It’s almost like a forbidden love. *Swoon*!
nah, she won’t forget, but I bet the path to discovering who he is is full of twists and turns. 🙂
Nice snippet!
No way is she going to forget him! Can’t wait to find out what happens next.
I love “transition guy.” Haha. I don’t think I’ve ever heard it put that way. But yeah, you aren’t supposed to fall for those one-night stands 😉 It puts a very interesting twist on it. I can’t wait to see what happens.
Sometimes you fall for someone when you least expect it – definitely makes for a more interesting story line.
A good follow-up from the previous night. I like the contrast between Jane’s feelings and Anne’s ‘practical’advice.
Wow. Thanks guys. I love seeing all these familiar faces and some new ones two. Simply fabulous. 🙂
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