Last Week I gave you the opening 6 from my latest WIP, In the Blind (working title), the story of Jane and Rob. The current logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.
I’ll continue with this story through the end of Six Sunday. This week I’ve skipped just a couple of paragraphs. The ladies are about to be escorted one by one into their rooms for the evening.
The room filled with screams from all the ladies as they danced into line, while Jane wondered, for the tenth time that day, if she was doing the right thing. Was this the best place for her to kiss her sexual slump goodbye? Anne, her best friend from forever, swore by the club. Jane didn’t want to take all the emotion out of the act, but she needed to get out of her own way and remember how freeing release could be. It had been months since her last orgasm. Of course, having her ex-boyfriend tell her she was a sexual deviant and unattractive hadn’t done her any favors.
Hope you enjoyed my six today. Remember, I’m the newbie, please share your advice. Thanks for stopping by today. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors.Try to find a new favorite 6 today.
Let’s hope she finds what she’s looking for! Well written.
Sounds like she has a doozy of an Ex. Nice setup!
Agree. Good setup!
Aww, poor girl.
Oh geesh. I felt sorry for her, too.
Oh, then I think the club is the right place for her. Her ex knows nothing.
Aw, poor thing! Her ex is a douche. Hope she finds what she’s looking for 😉
Ouch. No, that wouldn’t have helped matters much, LOL. So glad she’s going to let loose a little!
Oh my, I hope she can get her mind clear and enjoy whatever happens next. Excellent excerpt! This is an intriguing story for sure.
I love her internal conflict here. Excellent excerpt. I definitely want to read more.
I like this. You pack a lot history in this six so we know what’s at stake. Good job.
I hope she finds what she’s looking for! You’re characters always seem so real. Like we’re out for a drink and she’s telling us her problems. Lovely!
Her last boyfriend sounds like a nasty piece of work. I wonder if this club is the best place for her. Intriguing six, I hope she finds the release she’s looking for!
Think she’s about to leave her ex behind for good.
Oh! Bad, bad ex! Poor woman. But, it looks like things are about to change!
Definitely intriguing — and that last line made me laugh out loud. I’m glad she’s getting out of her own way. 🙂
Good job she got rid of the ex, hope she finds someone better than him!
Thanks everyone for taking the time to visit me, I appreciate each and everyone of you. Hope to see you all back here next Sunday.
Great six and kind of sad for her 😦
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