Happy Six Sunday. Did you miss me last week? Well, I missed you guys. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think!! I’m bringing you something new today, 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. All you need to know to get started: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s talking with security when a man enters the club.
“You’ll need to wait here for an escort, or…good evening, Master Simon. Would you like to escort our guest?”
Her heart skipped and she pushed the soles of her feet into the ground. He’s a Master, he’d be perfect. It’s okay if he says no, a rejection from a stranger means nothing. Nothing.
Will Master Simon escort Janna, or will she have to keep waiting? Please come back next week. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
I bet he escorts her in. Call it a hunch. Can’t wait till next week to see whether I’m right or not. Nice six, S.J.
Would it really mean nothing? I wonder what he’ll say. Nice six! 🙂
Nope, not to Janna anyway. I couldn’t stop her from trying to convince herself though. It’s something she has to work on, being honest with herself.
Intriguing six. Makes me curious about her and why she’s gone there alone.
I’m betting he does more than escort her. Can’t wait to see inside the club.
I’m gonna vote ‘yes’ on the escort thing, though he’ll probably want to collar and leash her first since she seems to be such an independently-minded little thing. LOL
I like the way you think, Lila.
I don’t think she’s convinced anyone, but that’s good writing 😉
Edgy six with Janna sounding like she’s trying to convince herself it doesn’t matter. So is she doing investigative journalism on the club or is she into it? Or both? Awesome six SJ!
What a cliffhanger! I also love how she’s trying to convince herself not to allow a rejection to daunt her. So realistic! Great six!!
Oh, I like this set up, SJ! Something tells me she doesn’t need to worry about rejection. I want more of Master Simon!
He is gonna escort her, ask why she came alone and introduce her to the full side she is about to unleash. Very intriguing six, I loved it and an anxious for more.
Is she going into this club for research? I’m curious as to why she’s going! Did you mean to write “sole?” Well, I want to know more about Master Simon.
YES!! Thank you, Editor Carrie 😀
You could say she’s going in for research in a personal sense and for no one else but her<– a concept that is new to Janna
Sounds like she knows all about rejection. Let’s hope Simon takes her in!
Teehee. Hey, if mean ole grumpy editors ride my “ass” ALL THE TIME, then, it behooves me to do the same to my fellow writing comrades. LOL!
Yes in deed and goodness knows I need someone watching my tookus, thanks again!
Interesting. Wonder what will happen 🙂
I think he’ll say yes – but I’m wondering just why she’s there on her own.
Intriguing six. Will he or won’t he?
Oh so many possibilities in that innocent six sentence excerpt, LOL. Very well done! Can’t wait to read more…
I like this. I smiled when the security guy quit talking to her as soon as Master Simon showed up–that says a lot about him. I think I’m going to like Master Simon. 🙂
I think the rejection of a stranger means more than she’s admitting…I also think he’ll escort her. Nice six 🙂
I’m betting he will 😉
Brave girl going there alone! Hope he escorts her inside, sounds exciting!
Excellent job leaving us wondering what she is up to. Research, personal fantasy, whim? Whatever her reason, I’m betting Simon will deliver.
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