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I’m back! I’ve so missed being a part of the WeWriWa ritual and I’m excited to be back. I did use my time wisely though and am happy to report I have TWO books coming soon.
Today, I’m sharing from the 2nd in my Love Projects series which is releasing very soon. Here’s the basics: When Janna’s new life threatens to break apart, she must decide if it’s best to run home or to stay and battle for the career and man she doesn’t want to live without.
Janna’s story starts as she enters a BDSM club as a guest. She’s trying to pay attention to the security guard reviewing her paperwork when a man enters the club. Once he’s identified as a club Master, Janna’s brain turns mushy. 😉 In this 8 you’ll see why. Enjoy!
The man stopped next to her, and her ability to play cool faltered. A Master. She took a deep breath and drank him in, starting with his dark boots of luscious black leather. Her gaze took the scenic route along his legs, drank in his firm body, to his broad chest encased in a casual black shirt.
“Can I see your ID?”
She continued her perusal of the Master and found the hard angle of his jaw and stopped at his striking green eyes, which were set directly on her. She couldn’t move. With his look alone, he commanded her attention.
Something tells me Janna has no idea she’s be asked a question. Lol. So, do you think she gets into the club?
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S.J. Maylee 
Welcome back. You had me on his luscious boots and body. 😀
Gem is a sucker for a nice pair of boots. 🙂
You create such chemistry in this scene. It’s not just a description, but you show the impact of the details on the character. Great job.
I say she gets in. 🙂 You had me mesmerized with his description. Yum.
Her gaze took the scenic route… Oh yep, she did. Loved the descriptions!
If she doesn’t get in, you will have at least one very disappointed reader! (I’m a sucker for boots, too.) Great snippet.
Lol! She most definitely gets in. You’ll have to come back to find out who her escort is. 🙂
Hmm, what? I’m supposed to comment? I got a little distracted. 🙂 Nice snippet! Can’t wait to read all of it!
Donna, you crack me up! 🙂
Hum, I don’t think she knows she’s been asked anything but I do think he’ll make sure she gets into the club. LOL Great snippet! He sounds delicious!
Well that’s certainly a hot start, loving the scenic route! Excellent excerpt, this story is off to a smoking start all right…
Good start.
I’m gonna guess Mr. Sexy Master Man will get her into the club somehow. 😉 Great excerpt, and welcome back!
Ohh, it sounds like she’s met her master right there. Good snippet, SJ, and congrats on the upcoming releases. 🙂
If she does get into the club, I’m guessing it’ll take the Master’s intervention! 🙂
He’s definitely worth a second look… but she’s not going to seem very organized if she can’t answer a simple question!
She might get in on the provision that a certain hot guy escorts her. 🙂
Welcome back! I like that she’s been stunned silent. Good work!
It sounds as if Janna is going to have more than she can handle – this guy is sure sexy sounding.
I’m guessing she gets in…and gets a little lesson to go with it.
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