Weekend Writing Warriors – Impressive

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Welcome friends new and old. I’m going to give you a couple more posts from the WIP I’ve been sharing before I move onto something new.

In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.

Over the past few weeks I’ve shared Jane’s experience at Club Blind and her business opportunity that put her back in touch with Rob. Rob isn’t keen on Jane’s job opportunity. It’s for the company his ex-wife works for.  Last Post Jane politely got up from the table and was ready to walk away. In this week’s post, I’ve skipped nothing.

“Wait.” He grabbed hold of her hand which was not yet out of reach. “I’m over-reacting.” He stood, leaving little distance between them. She looked beautiful, arching her neck to look into his eyes. He breathed in her sweet vanilla scent and he felt her fingers fold around his hand.

“Are you sure?” With the positive shake of his head she continued, “It would mean the world to me if you would meet with Keller. I know he’d be impressed by you.”

I’m impressed by you, Rob. He’s made his decision, but is it the right one? <If you want, you can Tweet That>

Hope you enjoyed my eight today. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Weekend Warriorsand Saturday Spankings too.

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22 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors – Impressive

  1. Glad he shook off his misgivings so he could spend more time with her and the hand touches were awesome.

    Every time I see your “tweet that” I remember I need to try it. So I made a quickie edit this AM. Since I “clone” posts from week to week, now I should be sure to remember for next week’s.

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