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Welcome friends new and old. I’m going to give you a couple more posts from the WIP I’ve been sharing before I move onto something new.
In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.
Over the past few weeks I’ve shared Jane’s experience at Club Blind and her business opportunity that put her back in touch with Rob. Last Post we found out why Rob isn’t keen on Jane’s job opportunity. It’s for the company his ex-wife works for. In this week’s post, I’ve skipped just a little and we’re still in Rob’s POV.
His marriage wasn’t meant to survive. His promises weren’t meant to be kept. It was time to stop punishing himself.
“I’ll let you know if I find another opportunity.” She stood and lingered. “Thanks for meeting me today. It was good to see you again.” She took a step from the table.
Wait!! He’s not going to let her leave, is he? Time’s A Wastin’ Rob. You’re not thinking Jane wants to leave anyways, right? <If you want, you can Tweet That> Come back next week and I’ll give you another clue.
Hope you enjoyed my eight today. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Weekend Warriors, and Saturday Spankings too.
S.J. Maylee 
Rob, Rob, Rob. Get up dude! I’ll be back next week to see what he does.
(No snippet for me this week.)
I see her walking really slowly away from the table and then him hopping to his feet to follow. (I hope anyway:)
No, don’t let her leave!
He better not let her leave!
Sounds like he better act fast!
Awww, Rob. Jeez.
But if you want to torture your characters, you must let her leave with his words unspoken, sealed in his heart.
Sure hope Rob doesn’t let her leave! Looking forward to the next instalment.
Can’t wait to see if he stops her! Great 8!
Has Rob never heard that he who hesitates is lost? Always fun to read the excerpts from this story!
Nice work conveying her complicated feelings at this point!
I love the beginning of this one. Even just jumping in randomly it intrigues me. Well done.
~Summer
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I hope he stops her! Loving this!
He has to stop her from leaving – NOW!
This is interesting. I hope he’s not going to let her leave. Great snippet!
So, he’s letting her leave?
Nice snippet! I wonder if he can push past his insecurity to ask her to stay…
Nice. I am very intrigued and will need to go back and read the others now! 🙂
Aw, I love a tortured hero. Somehow I don’t think he’ll let her leave though!
Great 8!
It’s time for her to real him in because I think he’s hooked. He just doesn’t know it yet. lol!
Oh Nooo! Rob, say something! Great post, SJ. 🙂
Thanks everyone! I love reading your comments every week. It’s much appreciated.
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