This week I’ll give you another six from my current WIP, In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past two posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.
Two weeks ago, Jane striped her clothing. Last Week, she got in line and reminded herself why she’d come to the club. It’s the kind of place where they turn off all the lights, clothing is not an option, and they pair you up to… 😉 I’ve skipped a little bit more to find this week’s six. Jane has just taken the hand of her escort, the one with the night vision goggles, he’s taking her to the room and her date for the night.
Once the door closed behind them, Jane was surrounded by unending black. She looked around, but there was nothing, no end to the darkness. A nervous shiver danced up her spine, and thoughts of haunted houses filled her thoughts until her escort tugged her forward, bringing her back to the night’s purpose.
She was about to touch the man that would give her release.
They slowed, turned a corner, and after a couple more steps they stopped. Her heart raced with excited jitters. Her escort placed her hand into another.
Hope you enjoyed my six today. Remember, I’m the newbie, please share your advice. Thanks for stopping by today. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors.Try to find a new favorite 6 today.
S.J. Maylee 
Eek! I love the building tension! I want to know who she’s with!! Great six! 🙂
Intriguing six. I want to know more.
Very dark and sexy!
Nice build up, tense!
That would make one jittery, to not see who you’ve just been hooked up with.
Great tension in your six. Love the description and her response to her situation.
Oh, you’re killing me. That’s it?! More please! lol Seriously, fantastic six. The anticipation is wonderful (and killing me!). I love it. I adore the premise.
Oh what a place to leave us! Really enjoying the story and this was another excellent excerpt.
Oh, wow. Scary and sexy.
Great buildup, I love the sense of mystery and excitement!
Nice building of tension 🙂
Great Sex! I mean SIX! 😉
I absolutely LOVE the premise for this novel. How far along are you in this WIP?? I want the whole thing!
Aw, you’re sweet, Colette. I have it plotted and I’m past the 1/2 point in the first draft. It won’t be long now.
Oh wow! More, more, more!
Great build up of tension!
Super sexy six! And what a GREAT premise!!
Nice tension!
Oh, I hope she gets all she’s looking for! Sounds sexy but dangerous, to me. 🙂
I know what you mean Diane, but don’t worry about Jane. I’ve skipped all the insights of the club and it’s policies and steps it takes to keep everyone safe.
Thanks everyone for stopping by yesterday. I so enjoyed your 6s this week.
Oooh, this is great — sexy and intriguing. It’s an awesome premise. Can’t wait to see more of it. Well, not SEE, since it’s pitch black. LOL You know what I mean!
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OMG the ANTICIPATION! You rocked it!