Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting and I’d love to know what you think!! I’m continuing this week with another 6 from my Novella WIP. It has been a couple of weeks, here’s my last six to refresh your memory. I left Jake stumbling in his attempt to keep his thoughts on the job. He’s left the room with the excuse of ordering them lunch, instead he’s set out for a cold shower.
“Hey there, Jake, how’s it going with the little betty?” Keller jabbed.
“Just great”
“I’ve got the towels set out for you, go on, take a quick shower and calm yourself. I’ll have Anne order you two up some lunch.”
“Thanks Keller, I want to strangle you, but thanks.”
“Hey, don’t mention it, just remember to invite me to the collaring ceremony,” Keller joked.
Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
S.J. Maylee 
I’m in envy of the flow of your dialogue. Great work.
You caught the essence of their relationship in just a few words. Nice work.
Love the banter! Great job
Fantastic dialog, SJ. Jake seems as though he’s in a tail spin. I’m looking forward to more of this story!
Great dialogue!
Love the interplay 🙂
Love the banter and the depth of your characters! Well done.
Thanks you guys!! You’ve revved me up for lots more writing this week 😀
Collaring, yum! I didn’t know this was a BDSM book until then. Well, assuming it IS a BDSM book 🙂
Oh, yes, cat is out of the bag
yum for the collaring 🙂 I totally agree, now I just need for Jake to agree
Collaring ceremony! LOL! I love the banter between these two. Reads like a fun story!
Great dialogue….and ooooooo……. a collaring ceremony 😀
You had me a collaring. 🙂 Need. More.
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