Picking my 6 this week was the hardest so far. I’m still working on my 1st WIP but as you can see by the graphic on the right I’m getting close to being done with this book. I’m hoping I do not turn into one of those writers who never finishes. I really like to finish projects and I really want to join a critique group!!! I’m currently working on some edits.
Back to today’s post, this week I’m starting to show you some heat from my book. Although this isn’t the first heated scene, it’s the first I’m sharing. Sam and Mark are meeting for the first time at Club Voyage. Here are six from the end of their greeting at the beginning of the evening.
While staring deeply into my eyes he takes both his hands and caresses my breasts.
He locates both of my nipples through the fabric, pinches and then pulls.
He does pinch a lot harder than I do, oh that’s nice.
“Eyes on me Sam,” he commands.
I open my eyes and he’s staring into…me, making me feel so many things.
“Follow me.”
I’m starting to get the feeling Sam would follow Mark just about anywhere, but we shall see. I hope you enjoyed my first sneak at the heat!!
I’ve really enjoying all the authors who participate in SixSunday!! I have a few new books I’ve already read, couple waiting for me to read and still a few to buy. I wonder what new attachments I’ll make today, make sure to go make some of your own: SixSunday
Very hot! Looking forward to reading more and hearing about your first complete novel.
Thank you Joy!!! I looking forward to being able to talk about my first complete novel!!
Good snippet. Joining a critique group or having a critique partner is so important. You’ll learn so much and really take your writing to the next level. You’re off to a great start already. Congrats on almost being at The End!
I really hope it is not too hard to find the right group for me!! Thanks for stopping by today, don’t forget to come back!!!
Oh where to??! Great six.
Yes, where to, her adventure has truly begun!!
*claps* Yes…FOLLOW HIM! LOL! Great six!
yes, I agree, she had no choice in the matter and follow she does…
Nice heat in this scene. I think I’d do as he says and follow! Congrats on having the end of your book in sight! Always a wonderful feeling to write “The End.” Enjoyed this six.
I’m looking forward to feeling I have all the scenes I want and then coming back to it after someone else has read it!!!
WOW! Hot six, SJ! Can’t wait to read more! 🙂
yeah!! thank you Stephanie, please come back again!!
Great six! When I joined a critique group my writing improved so much! It was the best choice I ever made in my writing!
My writing has improved in just writing the book, I’m looking forward to my next stage!!!
Following the hot guy usually turns out well. 🙂
yes, pretty smart idea, following the hot guy, especially when it is his idea 😉
Great six!
thanks Dee, thank you so much for coming back again, love having you on my site!!!
Love the Alpha in this guy. Nice six!
I loved writing the Alpha in this guy, yum!!
Very nice six! Gotta love dominant men. Keep plugging away and you’ll finish!
thanks!! I love dominant men too 😀 I think this week more than any has encouraged me to press on and get her done
Sizzling…love a man that takes control….that last line is perfect. Great six 🙂
Thanks!! I have been temmpted a few times to add more, but he just says it so well 😉
Sexy stuff!
And you WILL finish, you’re nearly there! 😀
Thank you!!! I will, I will, you are right, I WILL FINISH!!
Very hot. Good luck with the book!
Thanks Jennifer!!! I’m back from my t-day holiday weekend and I’m jumping back in with both feet!!
Yummy six! So ready to follow him wherever!
Thanks!!! I think I’d follow him any where too 😀