Welcome friends old and new. I’m glad you came. I’m giving you something brand new today. I don’t have a working title yet or a logline, but picture a woman, her name is Gina. She’s still healing from divorce. Although she gets along with her ex, it’s his best friend, Marcus, that’s the last person she’d want to see on her night out.
Gina’s come to Club Voyage, the local BDSM club where she’s been a member for years. After a hard week, one she’s not proud of, she’s looking for release.
A loud whack sounded behind her and she whipped around. A dom stood near the wall of paddles and floggers. He smacked a wooden paddle against his hand, placed it back on the hook, and examined another. She couldn’t see his face, but attraction was instant. The way he examined each paddle before smacking his hand had her body tingling. What would it be like to be on the receiving end of a spanking made with such care? He took a step back, a wide paddle in his hand, and turned.
Her week just wasn’t going to get any better.
Hope you enjoyed my eight today, but Gina’s still looking for release. Poor Gina. Would you like to know more about Gina and Marcus? Please consider tweeting this. 🙂
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Oh my! Marcus! Loving this story!
I’d say her week is getting better… but you would know better than I 😀
I have to agree. I think her week just got a whole lot better.
Whoops! Though I’m with everyone else: I’m thinking she’ll be changing her mind about the state of her week pretty soon! 🙂
Oh! I haven’t read this one yet. FUN!
The week sounds better already, IMHO, if you’re Gina. Can’t wait to see where you go with the story – terrific snippet!
I like Marcus already! Hot snippet. 🙂
Ouch! What a week in store for her!
That is a very teasing and fun snippet! Lovely!
Great set-up. Of course the one she doesn’t want to see, is the one she sees! You have me curious as to why she doesn’t like Marcus.
Now I’m curious about Marcus.
Nicely done, SJ. From aroused to despairing in zero point two seconds. Great snippet. 🙂
Oops! Not what she expected but what will she do? Good inner conflict there, SJ.
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Great snippet! 🙂
Hm, what’s Marcus done? Great excerpt, SJ.
Wow Marcus, he seems to want to reverse the situation.
Uh-oh! This is going to be a great story! Fantastic begining!
Hmm… Her week seems to have gotten worse – though maybe it’s about to get better. But isn’t that just a kick in the teeth, to be so attracted to someone she dislikes so much…
Haha! Love it! Great 8 🙂
Thanks everyone. I’m always nervous to share my writing, but especially when it’s from something brand new.
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Oh I love it!