Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.
Gina took one last look at the man still sound asleep in his bed and let herself wonder what if. A curl of hair licked at his tender brow and temptation tickled through her. The sun maybe up and ready for the day, but he was clueless. She hoped to sneak away before he rose and thought better of the time they’d spent together. Her heart ached, she’d never really get to know this man, this man that challenged her completely, but she had to be the one that left. She couldn’t bear him telling her she wasn’t good enough.
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A quandary of emotions and want and yet spurning the reality of rejection… Quite a load here and very engaging… Leaves you wanting more…. My favorite today, yet all the others were so good too.
A lot of mystery left in what you didn’t say, perfect for a tease.
I love the emotion in this post, wonderful.
Very emotional and well written.
Emotional, definetely! But now I’m curious, why would she think of herself that way. Awesome flash SJ.
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Such a sad ending, but a great story told in just 100 words. Excellent writing