Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting this week and I’d love to know what you think. I have another 6 from my latest Novella BDSM WIP. It’s a sequel to the WIP I have been sharing these past many weeks. Last Week: while in Chicago for a conference, Janna gets a chance to enter a BDSM club for the first time. She’s found her escort in Master Simon and she’s gotten her first glimpse of real scenes. In last week’s 6 she took on her first order, stripping for the Dom. This Week: we continue were I left you last week.
With the last of her clothes set on the table, she straightened her back and let her shoulders fall.
Simon stalked towards her, stopped about a foot away, tempting her. “Well done, pet.”
She melted on the inside and swayed her hips as warmth filled her core. His gaze released her and she stood silent as he looked her over. Nerves threatened to walk back in, but she barred the way.
Not sure how much longer she’s going to be able to keep this up. It’s about to get interesting. Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
I love how his approval leaves her swooning. Nice six! 🙂
I can just visualize her nerves at work here. Nice scene.
Nice! I can feel her apprehension!
Oh fantastic…I can just see the scene in front of my eyes.
Great snippet…enjoyed how she reacted to his words!
Great description, and I especially loved this line: “Nerves threatened to walk back in, but she barred the way.”
Can’t wait to see what else he has her do.
I LOVE the way you turn a phrase. Terrific snippet, as always, this is an intriguing story!
You do a nice job of showing her nervousness competing with her desire. Interesting stuff ahead? I’ll bet! Great six, S.J.!
Excellent imagery. I was right there
Gah, I love those endearments – “pet” Makes me melt too 😉
Ooh, she’s getting bold. 🙂 Wonder what will happen next?
Brave little pet… Nice metamorphosis.
You packed a lot into a mere six sentences, I’m really enjoying this story, S.J.
It’s ABOUT to get interesting? Dang, I’ve been interested since the first snippet I read, LOL! Excellent phrasing of the last sentence. It really painted a vivid picture. Great six!!
Loved this line: “Nerves threatened to walk back in, but she barred the way.” Very nice!
Emotional and sexy!
Last line was brilliant!
Such an intense and hot six! Very nice!
Very sexy and the nerves just add to the pull. Great job.
Great six! I missed last week’s, so I had to go read that one too. The last line was awesome. 🙂
Aw, man, this is SMOKIN’!