Flash Fiction #16

Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.

Carla fell on the bed in an exhausted heap. She doubted she’d make it another day in this heat. Visions of Adam filled her mind making fire pool between her legs. The phone rang startling her from her discontent.


“Are you naked yet?”

“Oh, Adam, pretty much. I’m laying her thinking of you in my underwear. It’s so hot.”

“Let me help, sweetheart. Get some ice.”

He directed her to drag a cube of ice from her shoulders down to between her breasts. Her nipples stung with intensifying need. Puddles flowed drowning her in the rising tides of ecstasy.


Hope you enjoyed my flash today!! Don’t forget to follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday. Or click away on the links below.

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Dianne Hartsock: http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/flash-fiction-friday/
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Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com
Veronica Fredricks: http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com

7 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #16

  1. Phone sex with some fabulous lines I simply love: ‘fire pool’ ~ an oxymoron, for sure, but a splendid description as most are…’stung with intensifying need’……….’rising tides of ecstasy’!!! Oh, don’t even think of trying to save me!! Let me drown!! Wonderful flash!!!:) xo

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