Six Sentence Sunday #23

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting and I’d love to know what you think!! I’m continuing this week with another 6 from my Novella WIP. Last week: Last week Lydia had no luck, more like no courage, rolling out her seduction plan. This week: we pick up with them getting off the train near Lydia’s apartment. A rushed stranger gives her the push she needs.

A swirl of arms and legs…momentum kept her moving…Jake’s fingers squeezed around her forearm as she flew past him towards the wall of the exit ramp. Her back landed with a thud against the wall, his body followed.

“Oh, sorry, I was pushed from behind. Did you see that guy?” She didn’t even pretend to look for the helpful stranger. Her eyes stayed locked on the man pressing into her body.

Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

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