Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.
Not every bird brought frightening news, but the one piece she waited for had not yet arrived. Why hadn’t she given him a chance before the war? Oh, Melik. It took the death of many to rock her awake. Pain shivered through her limbs and she crashed to the ground. She rubbed her hands until the skin felt raw, matching her thoughts.
It was coming.
Just over the horizon, she felt the bird approaching. Her head fell into her hands and she yanked at her hair. Would she have one more chance? Just one more is all she asked.
Yes!
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Oh please let her have another chance. Let the bird bring good news. Great flasher
Fallen, but ready to fly again. Nice flash.
Looks like she’s going to get that second chance. Great flasher.
This could be the start of something a lot bigger Excellent
I loved the way you planted the hope after so much tension. Excellent work!
Fantastic Flasher! I love the story you’ve created and I love how well it complements the photo.
I’m left with so many questions! You’ve totally hooked me. Great post.
Everybody deserves a second chance! Fabulous FFF!
You did the picture justice with your words, SJ. It was a chilling view into the character’s inner voice. Well done.
Fantastic FFF. She does deserve a second chance. Loved your take on the pic.
I hope she receives the chance she pains to have…