Six Sentence Sunday #20

Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting and I’d love to know what you think!! I’m continuing this week with another 6 from my Novella WIP. Last week: Jake started to roll out his plan. He scolded, stalked, & invaded her space and did any of it scare Lydia? Hell no, she asked if there was anything else. This week: we pick up with the very next 6.

And there it was again, his eyes darkened into deep erotic pools of promise. She wanted to watch his eyes for the rest of eternity. Heat rolled off his body, seeped into her, and pulled her closer. His hand, still under her chin, snaked around to cup her nape locking her in place. Her breasts pressed into his chest, there was no denying her need to be touched. He removed the last bit of space between them and pressed his hard length into her belly.

Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!

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57 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday #20

  1. That is smoking! Love some of the language used as well, erotic pools of promise, removed the space – clever and interesting!

  2. Nice six. Great tension–good job on the showing. I’d kinda enjoy slipping into the pool of his eyes. Yes, ma’am. Indeed!

  3. I like the hand on the nape of the neck, an often neglected erogenous zone and it promises well that he knows about it. I can’t advise – het erotica isn’t my field – but there are some experts here who can.

    • So sweet, Sandra!! 😀 I’ve been tweaking the story for a bit now and hope to ship it off to my first beta reader by next Sunday. You probably have an idea of how tightly my fingers are crossed or wound 😉

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