Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting and I’d love to know what you think!! I’m continuing this week with another 6 from my Novella WIP. Last week I left Jake claiming he wouldn’t let go if Lydia poked him in the chest again. In today’s 6: Lydia has just escaped to the bathroom to wash her hands and to examine her latest thought of seducing Jake. Now for 6 from Jake’s POV.
The dom in him was aching to get out and not simply because he found her attractive. Something in her demeanor pulled on him and commanded him to push her limits. His fist hit the table, frustration swept through his body. It was hard to ignore his instincts. Even now he wanted to go to her and help. God help him, he wanted to touch her again.
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I love the struggle he is having, Enjoy writing it it!!
I love his inner battle, sexy!
Love watching him fight his urges. Nicely done!
Sounds like this Dom is totally smitten. That’s gotta drive him batty! 😉
I like! There is nothing like a good internal struggle.
I’d love to learn more about her demeanor that sparked such interest in him. He’s weak for her and I like it!
Great show of his struggle! I want to know what’s holding him back. 🙂
I haven’t included any of his backstory in the 6s, but I’ll say I’ve enjoyed poking at his rules and I’m hoping he starts to break them soon…
Great job conveying his frustration and his attraction, SJ. I definitely wanna see where this is going. 😉
I think you portrayed his inner thoughts and struggle very well. Excellent excerpt!
Nothing like a little inner conflict to get the juices flowing. Great six.
You’re creating a great atmosphere. I feel the tension sweeping through him as he longs to show his inner self. Well done
S.J. Very nice and the emotional struggle is beautiful. I wonder if he’ll cross that line later.
Great six! Love his internal struggle.
Awww… poor thing. I have to agree with above commenters and say that I love seeing his inner struggle! Thanks for sharing 🙂
Love his inner turmoil!
Great way to show his conflicting thoughts.
I’m so glad you guys are enjoying his pain, lol 😉 I love Jake and I do believe he has some better days ahead…
Great job showing his internal conflict.
Great show of tension, SJ. I love the build up here and can’t wait until he gets to touch her again. Sexy six!
Oh, yes. Do touch! LOL. I think this is fab!
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