I’m jumping in with both feet into the #SixSunday fun. Sure I’ve hesitated now for a few weeks, but no more. The six sentences below are from my current and 1st WIP I’m All Yours. Sam has come to her good friend for advice after firmly committing to learning about her own needs.
I look her in the eyes, I know she cares and will listen but I’m still nervous to start this conversation.
“I don’t think I can do that, it’s just too embarrassing,” I whisper as I swirl my finger in the condensation on my glass.
“Nothing doing, you know I’m open minded, no judgment here. Sam, look at me.” I look right at her, again.
“That’s better, I just want to help you, it’s obvious you want to talk to me about something, so go on, spill it.”
Please let me know what you think and come back next Sunday for six more sentences in Sam’s journey. Thank you to everyone over at http://sixsunday.com, if you have not yet checked out their site, go now, you just might find a new author to follow.
Ummm…thanks for the cliffhanger! Lol! What does she want to talk about? I need to know!
Thank you so much for sharing from your WIP! I cannot wait to read more next Sunday!
😉 thank you so much for coming by Dacia!!!!! Well I know exactly what she’s talking about lol!! Yes please come back next Sunday!!
intriguing! more next week, please.
I’m so glad you think so!!! My mind is already thinking about what to share next week!!
hmmm…wondering what she wants to talk about…definitely a great spot to leave the reader…hooked. lol
Nice 6 🙂
And congrats on jumping in with both feet…but watch out…SSS is addicting 🙂
hmmm…well I could tell you but then well 😉 I’m so glad you got left with that lovely hooked feeling!! lol
ah yeah I can already see the addictive ways of SSS
thank you so much for coming over!!!
Very intriguing, glad you decided to join the Sunday fun. Can’t wait to read more!
Thank you!! I hope you come back next week!!
Welcome to SSS! What does she want to talk about?? Can’t wait for next week!
Hmmm, I hope she has the courage to open up to her friend!! Please do come back next week!!
Welcome to SSS! Nice interaction and setup for next scene. 🙂
Wow, thank you so much!! I hope you come back next week!!!
Hello, SJ! I love the six! I hope you’re having a great Sunday!
Hello Stephanie and thank you!! It’s my first six but it wont be my last. I’m having a blast checking out all the posts and it’s so much fun having folks visit my site!!! Happy Sunday to you
Great debut, glad you decided to jump in! Loved the dialogue and looking forward to more! Fantastic six!
Thank you so much for coming over to see my 1st six today!! Jumping in is a good way to describe what I’ve done and now I cant wait to do it again
Fab first six! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
thank you thank you!! Please come back, I cant wait to share what happens next!!
That’s a good friend!
Oh, yes she is, Sam has no idea what a good friend she is 😀
Welcome to SSS!! Looking forward to your next six! 🙂
Thank you for the warm welcome!! I’m looking forward to my next and everyone elses next 6 too!!
Great six! You can really see how strong their bond is with a few short sentences. 🙂
Thank you so much!! I’m so glad you can sense their bond. Sam some how instictively knew too, it’s the first in a line of brave and smart moves on her part. I made her up, but I’m so proud of her 🙂
Welcome to SSS! I’m looking forward to reading more! 😉
Thank you and I Iook forward to many more weeks of SSS, this has been a lot of fun!!
I’m definitely hooked, SJ and can’t wait for more. Welcome to six sunday fun. Great debut…Your reply about Sam not knowing how good a friend she has is intriguing as is the entire excerpt.
Glad you’re hooked, music to my ears 🙂
I’m happy to know my characters are intriguing to more than just me, lol
please come back next week
Great hook. Look forward to more
oh thank you!! Please come back next week, I’m hoping you’ll feel that hook pays off a little bit, would love to know what you think
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