Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting and I’d love to know what you think!! I’m continuing this week with another 6 from my Novella WIP. Last week: Lydia got a little shove from a helpful stranger and Jake pinned her to the wall of the L train exit ramp. This week: we pick up with them all untangled and they’ve just arrived inside Lydia’s apartment. The moon is shining through the window. This six is from Jake’s POV and the line is Lydia’s.
Photo Credit: Joseph H. Dennis
The effect was a dream. Here she was standing before him, this woman who intrigued him and challenged him. His mind had one thought.
Mine.
“Stay there and I’ll get the light.”
The light clicked and before she could turn around he made his order.
Thank you so much for stopping by today!! he, he, he, I promise to give you his order next week. Please come back. I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday and its days are now sadly numbered. I’m not crying. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
S.J. Maylee 
I love that she intrigued him and challenged him 🙂 says so much about him!
He’s a good guy and I’m trying to prove it to him. Thanks and thanks for stopping by last night!!
I love how he silently claimed her for his own.
Thanks, Lisa. And finally here, well really next week, he’s finally going to start acting on that feeling
Like the possessive simplicity of the word, “Mine.” Says a lot about how he feels. Wasn’t sure what you meant by :”he made his order.” I assume there’s a line of dialog that follows that statement?
Yes in deedy, Cara. The request or demand changes everything…
Great six. Love the ‘mine’. Definitely wonder what his order is.
Yep, I can’t wait to find out what that ‘order’ is too. Most intriguing six!
Hey! Way to end on a cliffhanger! I’m hooked.
Definitely on pins and needles to find out what he orders! Very effective six!
Ohh I want to know more….You tease…
Love the tease ending, great hook. I’ll tune in for sure next week. LOL
I say we all tickle her till she gives us a seventh sentence. I’m lovin’ this story, S.J. 🙂
Mine. That simple claim always does it for me.
Oh, wow. I wonder what his order is? I’m thinking a kiss–am I right? (Sure hope so, LOL!) This is turning into a fine romance for these two. Great six, and can’t wait to see what happens next. =D
Yes, he knows what he wants. Great six! 🙂
A light switch has been turned on! Nice!
Very sexy. I love possessiveness in a man 😉
It’s intriguing that he’s captivated by her. Looking forward to finding out what his ‘order’ is.
No fair! I want to know what his order is now. Oh well, guess I’ll just have to come back next week. 😉
Nice. It says more than at face value. Intrigued and challenged him. Hmm…and he would possess her? She might have something to say about that..perhaps she’s not so easily owned? Great little cliffhanger in this six! 🙂
Very nice — I’m dying for that next sentence too! I ilke that he’s intrigued AND challenged — it sounds like he enjoys being challenged, so that’s going to make for a fun story. 🙂
Looking forward to knowing his ‘order’. Great six!
I really like the no nonsense nature of this scene. Great job!
Very cool! Great job!
I love the Alpha in this man. Hurry up, SJ! I need to read this!
Oh! Very intriguing! This one snapped up my attention.
What a cliffhanger! I wonder what he’s going to order her to do?
I so want to know what happens next!!!!
Hmm an order. That seems a bit presumptuous but maybe that kind of thing turns her on?
thanks for stopping by!! Yes, it is presumptuous, but this is a lil BDSM tale 😉
the question boils down to will she play or will she run…
Hmm… can’t wait to see what he says! 🙂
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“Mine.” <<<sooo incredibly sexy. Love this story!
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