Flash Fiction #54 – Finally

Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.

January 10, 2014

Kelly shuffled into the gym at the end of her block. She promised herself she wouldn’t pass it again without going in. Standing alone looking at her hands, she considered running home.

“Can I help you, miss?”

“Ah.” No more words would come. Her mind lost in utter envy of the light and how it rolled over his bare shoulders and licked at his rippling abs. “I mean I wanted to sign up.”

“Finally. I was wondering when you’d come in.” His gaze seared into hers. “Come. I need to hang a new bag and then we’ll set you up.”

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Jorja Lovett: http://jorja-lovett.blogspot.co.uk/
Pablo Michaels (Michael T Jordan): http://www.pmmanmanromance.com
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12 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #54 – Finally

  1. I am thinking you packed quite a wallop in those few 100 words. Perhaps he willed her in or she saw him as she pasted each day. Either way, I’m thinking they are ready for one another. Great flash: uplifting, happy, hopeful ❤ xo

  2. Perfect! I love how you set this up. I’m sure her first lesson will be ummm intense. 😉 That is if she doesn’t fall over her feet as she seems not to be able to take her eyes off him. 🙂

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