Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.
Another sappy love song blared through Rachel’s studio speakers and she still had no idea what to write. For weeks, she’d tried to make a move, to let Dan know she was interested. Her forever friend, the one that was always there, was the one that made her heart pitter-pat, not the jerks she’d been dating.
It was Dan, the gentleman. He’d never hit on her, not unless she made the first move.
With her blood pounding in frustration, she kicked her lighting boom and inspiration struck.
After several clicks, she held her breath, hit send, and began her wait.
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“With her blood pounding in frustration, she kicked her lighting boom and inspiration struck.
After several clicks, she held her breath, hit send, and began her wait.” These two sentences wrapped your flash to cure my anticipation she would find the right words for the perfect man for her.
Dan must be someone very special. Hope everything works out for them. Great flash
I agree with Pablo. Those two sentences really bring everything together perfectly. Who needs words when picture is worth a thousand of them? Loved it. Very creative. A photo within a photo: clever:) xo
I think he’ll be on his way quick as a flash, a Friday flash! Hope he isn’t too much of a gentleman to enjoy her brave gesture!
Dan is something special to her, especially if she’s writing to him completely naked. This wasn’t just tantalizing, but very romantic and erotic. Great flash SJ!
wow another teasing ending this week for flash. I’m curious how he responds to her. love it 🙂
How lovely. I hope Dan finally makes that move 🙂
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Hope she got what she wanted and Dan hurried up
Oh to be so daring. I love her! She does not hold back, and I hope Dan liked what she showed him and really saw how much she cared for him. I want to know more of what happens next. Awesome flash!