Flash Fiction #50 Dear Dan

Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.

October 18, 2013

Another sappy love song blared through Rachel’s studio speakers and she still had no idea what to write. For weeks, she’d tried to make a move, to let Dan know she was interested. Her forever friend, the one that was always there, was the one that made her heart pitter-pat, not the jerks she’d been dating.

It was Dan, the gentleman. He’d never hit on her, not unless she made the first move.

With her blood pounding in frustration, she kicked her lighting boom and inspiration struck.

After several clicks, she held her breath, hit send, and began her wait.

~~~

Hope you enjoyed my flash today!! Don’t forget to follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday. Or click away on the links below.

Michelle Howard: www.michellehowardwrites.com
AuroraRose Andromeda@yahoo.com: http://rollingmuseintheroses.blogspot.com
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
Sherri Hayes: http://sherri-hayes.blogspot.com/
Doris O’Connor: http://thetardisscribbles.blogspot.co.uk/
Ray Sostre: http://theafterdarkworld.blogspot.com
Davee Jones: http://finless.blogspot.com

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10 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #50 Dear Dan

  1. “With her blood pounding in frustration, she kicked her lighting boom and inspiration struck.

    After several clicks, she held her breath, hit send, and began her wait.” These two sentences wrapped your flash to cure my anticipation she would find the right words for the perfect man for her.

  2. I agree with Pablo. Those two sentences really bring everything together perfectly. Who needs words when picture is worth a thousand of them? Loved it. Very creative. A photo within a photo: clever:) xo

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  4. Oh to be so daring. I love her! She does not hold back, and I hope Dan liked what she showed him and really saw how much she cared for him. I want to know more of what happens next. Awesome flash!

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