Flash Fiction #47 Hope in a Picture

Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.

September 27, 2013

Rochelle brushed her nose against her knee and snuck another look at Javier as he slept. For weeks, they’d traveled together, but unless they were about to perform, he scarcely spoke.

He may have rescued her purse from the nasty thief that first day in Paris, but she’d never forget his curt reply to her heartfelt thank you.

“Next time I’ll let them keep it. Hold onto your stuff.”

She couldn’t figure out why he’d drawn a picture of her, but there she was in black and white. The need to ask him for something, anything left her in shivers.

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8 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #47 Hope in a Picture

  1. What a cliff hanger! I agree with everyone that this was a wonderful flash, a great teaser in every way! Her furtive glance after her discovery…her bubbling unanswered questions and her palpable fear. Beautifully constructed and executed! Amazing flash!:) xo

  2. I def want to know more too, have me hooked. Why is she still with him, what do they perform? So many questions. 🙂 Great flash

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