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Once again, I’m sharing from my just started WIP…Gina’s still healing from divorce. Although she gets along with her ex, it’s his best friend, Marcus, that’s the last person she’d want to see on her night out at the local BDSM club, but that’s exactly who she ran into. Last Week Marcus noticed Gina and basically called her a liar, nice. This week. I’ve skipped nothing.
“Always the gentlemen.” This had to be a new record. In less than a minute, he had her loathing herself. It didn’t matter he was working on incorrect data. “Hope not to see you again.” She waved as she turned to go.
“Wait.”
She kept moving.
His hand came down on her shoulder and pulled her around. “I said wait.”
Wait for what? I think I know, lol. Hope you’ll come back and find out and I hope you enjoyed my eight today. Poor Gina, she’s still looking for release. Maybe next week, maybe. 😉 Here’s a tweet, if you want to share.
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S.J. Maylee 
Such tension between these two and you capture it perfectly!
You communicate the tension and his dominance so subtly. Nice job.
Agreed. You capture the tension between them very well. I love his dominance here. Course, now I want to know what he has to say!
What will he have to say to her?
This relationship is deliciously tense. I want to see him apologize, the jerk.
Perfect tension! I’ll be back to find out why he wants her to wait. 🙂
Can’t wait to keep reading this story! I’m glad he persists…great snippet!
Uh-oh! Will be interesting to read how this pans out, 🙂 Some of the most passionate encounters come from love/hate feelings.
I can only guess he has something worth waiting for. 😉
He’s pushy, and wrong, but I get the feeling we’ll be forgiving him anyway…
Nicely done. I can’t wait to find out more. Will definitely be back next week! 🙂
The tension is evident! I’ll bet Marcus and Gina end up together at some point.
She should wait. she’ll be glad she did
Wait for what! You’re a big tease. LOL Great snippet.
Nice! Love that last line.
This is too cruel, I want to know what she needs to wait for.
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Thanks everyone!! 😀