Welcome friends new and old. It’s Sunday, so I’m sharing six, NOPE, hold the phone, I’m sharing EIGHT sentences from my WIP.
I’ll continue where I left off last week from my current WIP, In the Blind (working title), and you can see the past five posts from this WIP here. The Logline: When a head hunter finds her dream lover in a night of pitch black unrestrained passion, she fears she’ll never find him again. Fate steps in and throws the two together, but they might never discover the truth and stay in the blind.
Over the past few weeks we’ve seen Jane remove her clothes, leave her bad memories behind, and get her first kiss at Club Blind. It’s the kind of place where they turn off all the lights, clothing is not an option, and they pair you up to… 😉 Rest assured, the club stands by the motto: safe, sane, and consensual. Last Week Jane figured out why they needed no blankets as she was engulfed in the sexual heat of the night. I’ve skipped a few lines. Jane’s mystery man has been, ah, kissing her somewhere. Today I’ll give you 8-more from this scene.
Pleasure swelled through her kicking her breathing into a higher gear, another second and the orgasm would pulse to life, but he let go. Her complaint fell quiet when his fingers filled her and stroked from the inside. The blissful tingles of an orgasm wanting to run free gathered strength. Her limbs shifted and stretched, swaying to the rhythm of the music.
She needed to touch the man giving her pleasure like she’d never known, but once again, he left her wanting before the orgasm broke loose. The bed shifted slightly and she felt his knees move along side her hips. She reached for him and found his shoulders, her fingers gripped while his hand caressed her body to land beside her head.
He nipped her earlobe. “Are you enjoying yourself?”
I think I’ll leave Jane right there for the week. 🙂 Hope you enjoyed my eight today. Thank you so much for visiting me, it means a lot to me that you took the time to visit my little place on the web. Don’t forget to check out the other Weekend Warriors and Saturday Spankings too. I hope to see you again next Sunday.
Very sexy, love the way he’s teasing her and your powerful descriptions!
If she’s as frustrated as I am, not sure. @_@
Oh the voice and nip would probably finish me off just fine! 🙂
Oh, how I LOVE the teasing! I hope he finishes the job. ;cP
Quite the tease! I can feel her wanting. Hope it comes to fruition. 🙂
Frustrating indeed, but it does sound very fun to me.
I love the way her orgasm has it’s own character. great six!
What a question! Terrific excerpt, definitely leaves us all – not just your character – wanting MORE!
Delayed gratification can really be a bi@#h!! Great snippet!
S.J., honestly, you’re killing me. MORE! lol seriously, I love this. You’ve got me thuroughly hooked. Fantastic snippet.
Holy hot stuff, you left us hangin’ just the way her man is teasing her! Nicely done.
I love the idea of Club Blind – so very sexy! He’s a master at the tease, isn’t he? Got my heart pumping! So happy for the additional 2 sentences!
I love this idea of Club Blind. It’s very sexy and so fun to read. Great snippet, SJ. 🙂
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