Flash Fiction #27 – Always waiting

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Her plan unraveled into a terrible mess. She played all she had and she couldn’t delay Mark anymore. His musk and charm confused her, he wasn’t the one she desired. His strong arms braced around her, trapping her in a puzzle she didn’t want to solve.

“I didn’t think you’d ever see through James, I’m glad I was wrong.” Mark kissed her neck.

She did see through James, but she didn’t want to give him up. Make him jealous, yes. Mark kissed her again. Pleasure spiked through her body and begged for her attention.

She looked back, waiting for James.

Hope you enjoyed my flash today!! Don’t forget to follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday. Or click away on the links below.

Naomi Shaw: www.authornaomishaw.com
AuroraRose Andromeda: http://rollingmuseintheroses.blogspot.com/
Angelica Dawson: http://angelicadawson.blogspot.com
Benjamin Russell: http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com/
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/

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6 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #27 – Always waiting

  1. I don’t think James is going to show up, unless he’s in for a kinky menage. Men really don’t like it when women play that make them jealous card, especially when it goes as far as this hand is being played. Once Mark finishes with her, James will be finished too. He won’t want soppy seconds, unless he’s a real kinster. Hmm, who knows.

    SJ, I agree with Gemma, damn – you have a delightful way with words. I love this line – “His strong arms braced around her, trapping her in a puzzle she didn’t want to solve.” Wow, that is sooo cool. Loved it.

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  3. Oh the tension, that is boiling up before her. Is she waiting for James to show up and be surprised at what is unfolding? Is this to make poor James even more jealous? I wonder… I wonder how she will get out of this “puzzle” as you say, as she has clearly gotten herself in the mix of it all. What will Mark do if or when he finds out the truth of how she feels about James. Can she save the “spark” she feels for James and not lose him too? Hmmm the “puzzle” deepens and this flash def has its twists and turns. Curious as to how it turns out. 🙂

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