Thanks for stopping. Another picture…another 100 words.
Anne could count on one had the number of times she has cried. Today was number 5. She believed she was sturdy, made from hard circumstances, and capable of handling anything thrown at her. This first week with Joseph sparked a new light. He cracked her open sometime yesterday and now her submission rolled out in effortless waves.
It was a simple request.
“Let me hold you.”
For the first time she heard the truth behind his words, the truth so obvious in his eyes and his touch. She collapsed in his embrace and let him in, into her heart.
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Wow, that was awesome! You did a great job with the flash, S.J.!
Lovely flash Sweets 🙂
That was beautifully written. “He cracked her open sometime yesterday….”? That is a brilliant line. Fabulous flash:) xo
Powerful and emotive. Good job!
Very beautiful post! Just so much love in very few words. :o)
So emotional with so little words. Fantastic job.
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Beautiful Flasher! Loved the last line and all the raw emotion you showed.
That was beautiful!
I love the emotion that was in your story considering how short it was ! Beautiful!
Lovely post!
Written fabulously, and beautifully crafted. Excellent post!
Lovely FFF!