Flash Fiction #2

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“You’ll look good in whatever you decide to wear, Angie.” His roommate was gorgeous, but it was her heart that healed his soul and made him fall in love with her. Too bad he could never tell her.

“That’s easy for you to say, Jack. I mean would you look at you?”

She stood there half dressed with concern evident in her dazzling eyes. “What?”

“When are you going to start dating? James and Liz left us over a year ago. At least I’m trying to move on, I think you should too.”

“Angie, I’m fine right where I am.”

18 thoughts on “Flash Fiction #2

  1. You claim that this is tame…but the emotions in it are not. I would love to see what happened to them in the past and how they survive it together in the future! Great job!

  2. He’s fine right where he is??? No he wants to be lying there with her on top of him instead of sucking on a cig. Why can’t he tell her? This has the potential to make a great short story. Great job.

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