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“You’ll look good in whatever you decide to wear, Angie.” His roommate was gorgeous, but it was her heart that healed his soul and made him fall in love with her. Too bad he could never tell her.
“That’s easy for you to say, Jack. I mean would you look at you?”
She stood there half dressed with concern evident in her dazzling eyes. “What?”
“When are you going to start dating? James and Liz left us over a year ago. At least I’m trying to move on, I think you should too.”
“Angie, I’m fine right where I am.”

Oh very nicely done. I love the banter!
thank you sweets!!
I think the girls will find him, even if he does just lie there! Come on Angie, wake up and see the love in his eyes before someone else does!
oh man, wouldn’t that just be the ticket. She finally gets brave enough to ask him if he cares and she finds him taking her advice- out on a date with someone else
If read in the right tone you can feel they wan each other. You can smell the tension. I love it!
that’s so cool, something tells me he has no clue what she really thinks
Don’t worry about it being tame. This is emotionally tight and that goes a long way. Very nice and emotionally solid and the dialogue is wonderful.
Thanks Kendal 😀
I loved it. It left me hoping he finally makes his feelings known to her. I wonder how it will happen…great FFF
I wonder too, I also wonder if she loves him right now, hmmm…to plot or panst
Oh yes- now if you’re fine where you are, then get up and take the girl out!
Lee, I like how you think 🙂
You claim that this is tame…but the emotions in it are not. I would love to see what happened to them in the past and how they survive it together in the future! Great job!
ah thanks Haven!! what he thinks is unrequited love can be real sticky business. They would be fun to explore
Wow, I love your take. Nicely done!
Loved this. He is indeed fine where he is. Fantastic FFF.
What a tender impression. I love this post. He loves her and is willing to wait for her until she realizes she loves him, too. Wonderfully hopeful:) xo
He’s fine right where he is??? No he wants to be lying there with her on top of him instead of sucking on a cig. Why can’t he tell her? This has the potential to make a great short story. Great job.