Happy Six Sunday. Thanks for visiting and I’d love to know what you think!! I’m continuing this week with another 6 from my Novella WIP. Last week: Jake started to roll out his plan. He scolded, stalked, & invaded her space and did any of it scare Lydia? Hell no, she asked if there was anything else. This week: we pick up with the very next 6.
And there it was again, his eyes darkened into deep erotic pools of promise. She wanted to watch his eyes for the rest of eternity. Heat rolled off his body, seeped into her, and pulled her closer. His hand, still under her chin, snaked around to cup her nape locking her in place. Her breasts pressed into his chest, there was no denying her need to be touched. He removed the last bit of space between them and pressed his hard length into her belly.
Thank you so much for stopping by today!! I’d like to know what you really think of my 6. I need the advice, I’m a newbie and have much to learn. Don’t forget to check out the other Six Sunday authors. Lots of good stuff at Six Sunday. Try to find a new favorite today. happy hunting!
Why on earth did you stop there? lol
More please.
Tee hee hee b/c I’m evil, jk 😀
Mmm. Yeah, what Layna said. Nice job.
Thank You 😀
Very sensual and good showing!
Thanks, Laura!!
What a yummy snippet!
Thank you. These two are only getting started.
That is smoking! Love some of the language used as well, erotic pools of promise, removed the space – clever and interesting!
Thanks, Skye!! I was actually worried what you guys would think about the pools line. Hope the line pulled you in just like his eyes are doing for Lydia.
That is so sexy! I, too, want more! 🙂
Yeah! I’ll give you more 🙂
“erotic pools of promise”. Ugh. I just melted into a puddle. SO sexy and yummy and.. well, you know. Whew! Must have more.
Most excellent! Jake leaves me melting all the time 😉
Very steamy and compelling. Great six!
Thanks so much, Karyn!
Excellent snippet, hot and sensual!
Hi, Gemma! Thank you 🙂
Enjoyed the last line. He’s getting closer!
Yes, a smidge at time, right, lol
This moment in a seduction is one of my favorites, and you’ve done a beautiful job invoking it, S.J. Awesome Six!
Agreed, seduction is sweet. Thank you, Eden!!
Hot six!!!
Thanks, Jennifer!
Nice six. Great tension–good job on the showing. I’d kinda enjoy slipping into the pool of his eyes. Yes, ma’am. Indeed!
Thanks, Lea!! Love showing.
Sensual writing indeed – *I* like his eyes! Will be interesting to see what happens next with these two – great six!
Yeah, sensual. Thank you!
Wonderful six!
Thank you, Samantha!!
Oh, wow! Now that is sexy!
Yes! Thank you, Lisa 🙂
I like the hand on the nape of the neck, an often neglected erogenous zone and it promises well that he knows about it. I can’t advise – het erotica isn’t my field – but there are some experts here who can.
Agreed, that simple gesture is yum. My 6s aren’t always going for the heat, Elin. Please come back next week.
Sizzling and sensual. You’ve got heat happening everywhere! HOT six!
Thanks, Mae!! That’s what I was after
Hoo, that was hot! *fans self*
Only minor nit: Heat roll –> Heat rolled
Yes, rolled! How do I miss these things. Perfect example of being too close to my work. Thank you, Angela!! 😀 Oh and I’m so glad you needed a fan 😉
Whew! It’s heating up!
Oh yeah! 🙂
I like how determined he is — and she seems like just the perfect match for him. 🙂
She is, Donna, now I need to convince them both of that 😉
Very sex-ay six, SJ! Hurry up and finish this puppy, I need to read it!
So sweet, Sandra!! 😀 I’ve been tweaking the story for a bit now and hope to ship it off to my first beta reader by next Sunday. You probably have an idea of how tightly my fingers are crossed or wound 😉
Oooh, me likey “deep erotic pools of promise”. Very nice!
Thanks, Claire!! Thanks too for coming by tonight.
Very nice!! Gee, I wonder what else he has up his sleeve?
Hot six, excellently shown.
Hey, I like a man with a slow hand as much as the next girl, but it’s just mean to tease us this way! 😉
That’s me, the evil one, lol 🙂
Totally sensual and definitely leaves us wanting more! You’re a newbie, S.J.? Coulda fooled me! 🙂
You are too sweet Ryan!! Come back next week and I’ll try and fool you again 😉
Yummy. Love this moment between them. Can’t wait to see what happens next. 😉
Thanks, Lorraine 🙂 Hope you had a wonderful time with your mom!!
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Holy frijoles, that was HOT. *Amazing* job of building sexual tension.